Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，建议注意主谓一致和避免重复，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are traditional plants that help people feel relaxed. They also make great gifts to comfort others.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并直接回答问题。

例: I don't know anyone personally, but I love flowers because their fragrance and colors bring happiness. They are great for decoration or gifts.

提案: 回答中语法和用词不准确，建议注意名词单复数和介词使用，表达更流畅自然。

例: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because it's a European urban city. I rarely see flowers on the street, but I buy some from the supermarket to feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，注意词汇搭配和句子结构。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers and nature because it helps me feel relaxed and confident.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，注意句子连贯和语法正确。

例: Yes, people often send flowers as gifts because they are traditional and express emotions. For example, I usually send flowers on special occasions.

× I think flowers is a traditional plants that can make people feel more relaxed when they see, see, see them.

✓ I think flowers are traditional plants that can make people feel more relaxed when they see them.

flowers是复数，谓语动词和表语也应使用复数形式。plants是复数，前面不应加a。

× Also flowers can be a gift to give another people to make them relax and more comfortable, comfortable.

✓ Also flowers can be a gift to give to other people to make them relax and feel more comfortable.

people是复数，前面不应加another，应使用other people。

× So I think flowers is very good for us.

✓ So I think flowers are very good for us.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。

× I love the flowers very, very much because I think flowers so fragrance and the color it can make other people happiness and delightful.

✓ I love flowers very, very much because I think flowers are so fragrant and their colors can make other people happy and delighted.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。fragrance是名词，形容词应为fragrant。happiness和delightful词性不匹配，应改为happy和delighted。

× So I think flowers is a good place to make to as a decoration or gift.

✓ So I think flowers are good to use as decoration or gifts.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。place用法不当，应改为use。gift应使用复数形式gifts。

× No, they are not have a lot of flowers where I live because I'm living in a Euro SE urban city and there are not too much flowers to plant in on the street.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers where I live because I live in a European urban city and there are not too many flowers planted on the street.

句子中they are not have结构错误，应使用there are not。flowers是可数名词，修饰词应为too many而非too much。plant应使用过去分词planted。

× So I seldom see the flowers on the street, but I can go to the supermarket to buy them flowers to make me relaxed and comfortable.

✓ So I seldom see flowers on the street, but I can go to the supermarket to buy them to make me relaxed and comfortable.

the flowers前不需要定冠词the。buy them flowers结构错误，应为buy them。

× I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life because I like to take photos in nature screens rather than to take some photos for people.

✓ I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life because I prefer to take photos of natural scenes rather than photos of people.

nature screens用法错误，应为natural scenes。take photos for people应改为take photos of people。

× Because when I take some photos of nature I can feel more relaxed and confidence and it can make me more smoothing but make takes.

✓ Because when I take some photos of nature, I can feel more relaxed and confident, and it can make me feel more calm and smooth.

confidence是名词，应使用形容词confident。smoothing用法错误，应改为calm或smooth。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yes, they often send flowers as a gift to another people because I think flowers is a traditional gift for others and it can remain a lot of emotions and makes other people feel comfortable so it can be a good gift to for another people For example, I usually.

✓ Yes, they often send flowers as gifts to other people because I think flowers are a traditional gift for others and they can convey a lot of emotions and make other people feel comfortable, so they can be good gifts for other people. For example, I usually...

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。gift应使用复数形式gifts。another people用法错误，应为other people。remain a lot of emotions用法不当，应改为convey a lot of emotions。makes应改为make以符合复数主语。