Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（flour应为flower），语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和不连贯的问题。建议注意单词拼写，避免重复，使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I don't love flowers because they often attract insects, and I am afraid of insects. Although flowers are beautiful, I prefer to avoid them.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，重复使用词汇。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers very much. Our home has many different species of flowers. However, I am a little scared of flowers because they attract insects.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子不完整且缺乏连贯性。建议注意主谓一致，句子完整，使用连接词表达因果关系。

例: No, there are not many flowers where I live. My community usually plants trees and grass instead. I think flowers are very pretty, so it would be nice if they planted more flowers.

提案: 回答中语法错误多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，使用正确的代词和时态。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I don't like them. But sometimes, when I go to the park with my mom who likes flowers, I help her take pictures.

提案: 回答中存在重复，语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复，清楚表达花的象征意义。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers have a positive meaning. For example, when someone is ill and goes to the hospital, people give them flowers to wish them hope and recovery.

× No, I don't like flour because flour always attract attract insect.

✓ No, I don't like flowers because flowers always attract insects.

这里“flour”应为“flowers”，表示“花”，而非“面粉”。“insect”应为复数形式“insects”，因为花会吸引多只昆虫。名词单复数错误。

× flour always attract attract insect.

✓ flowers always attract insects.

主语是复数“flowers”，谓语动词用原形“attract”正确。原句中“attract attract”重复，应去掉重复。

× Although flower is beautiful but 'cause it's trapped in sector so I don't like flower.

✓ Although flowers are beautiful, but because they attract insects, I don't like flowers.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，谓语动词也应相应变为“are”。“trapped in sector”应为“attract insects”，原句表达不清。

× My home have a lot of flower and it's different different space species.

✓ My home has a lot of flowers and they are different species.

“home”作为单数第三人称，谓语动词应为“has”。“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“it's different different space species”表达不正确，应改为“they are different species”。

× Actually I I'm scared flower a little because it attract insects.

✓ Actually, I'm a little scared of flowers because they attract insects.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“it attract”主谓不一致，应为“they attract”。

× No actually I don't know why my community don't plant flower.

✓ No, actually I don't know why my community doesn't plant flowers.

“community”作为单数，谓语动词应为“doesn't”。“flower”应为复数“flowers”。

× They always plant trees or grass.

✓ They always plant trees or grass.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× I think flower is so pretty but it's not plant flower.

✓ I think flowers are so pretty but they don't plant flowers.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“it's not plant flower”表达不正确，应改为“they don't plant flowers”。

× I don't know why I think if they plant flower I.

✓ I don't know why. I think if they plant flowers, it would be good.

原句结构混乱，缺少完整句子，应拆分并补充完整表达。

× No because I don't like flower but sometime I will go to the park with my mom and my mom like flower and he and she will go the flower and I help her take photo and.

✓ No, because I don't like flowers, but sometimes I go to the park with my mom. My mom likes flowers and she goes to the flowers, and I help her take photos.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“sometime”应为复数形式“sometimes”。“my mom like”应为“my mom likes”。“he and she”表达不清，应改为“she”。句子过长且结构混乱，需拆分。

× I maybe take picture to the flower.

✓ I may take pictures of the flowers.

“picture”应为复数“pictures”。“take picture to”表达错误，应为“take pictures of”。

× Yes, my country, my country people often send flowers to others because they they think flower mean is good mean.

✓ Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others because they think flowers have a good meaning.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”。“flower mean is good mean”表达不正确，应改为“flowers have a good meaning”。

× And if the people get ill and she go to the hospital and someone will give her flowers hope. Guesthouse.

✓ And if people get ill and go to the hospital, someone will give them flowers to wish them hope and a speedy recovery.

“the people”应为“people”。“she go”应为“she goes”或改为复数“people go”。“flowers hope. Guesthouse.”表达不清，应改为完整句子。