Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I love flowers such as jasmine, roses, and Chinese roses because they bring joy to people, and it's hard for anyone to refuse a beautiful bouquet.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在语法错误。建议完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She often buys various kinds to decorate our home, especially on my birthday or during special festivals.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my community. When I walk my dog, I often see beautiful flowers, which always make me feel happy.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，且内容不连贯。建议用简单明了的句子表达，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers and keep them in my album. Looking at these photos makes me very happy.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，清楚描述不同场合送花的习惯。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions. For example, couples exchange roses on Valentine's Day, and children give flowers to their mothers on Mother's Day.

× no one can say no to a bunch of flower.

✓ no one can say no to a bunch of flowers.

这里bunch是复数集合名词，后面flower应使用复数形式flowers。

× She usually buys some buys by many kinds of flowers to our to our home

✓ She usually buys many kinds of flowers for our home

many kinds of后面应接复数名词flowers，且buy后不应重复，介词应为for而非to。

× When I walking my dog I can see many flowers in my community

✓ When I was walking my dog I could see many flowers in my community

描述过去动作时，walking应使用过去进行时was walking，can see应改为过去时could see。

× when I see this, when I see these flowers, it makes me joyful.

✓ when I see these flowers, it makes me joyful.

this和these指示代词用法错误，flowers为复数，应使用these。

× Nowadays I I may I will take photos with flowers.

✓ Nowadays I may take photos of flowers.

may和will不应连用，且take photos后应接介词of而非with。

× It makes me very happiness and joyful.

✓ It makes me very happy and joyful.

happiness是名词，形容词形式应为happy。

× People usually send flowers on different occasions, like couples, wells and roses to others in Valentine's Day,

✓ People usually send flowers on different occasions, like tulips, lilies and roses to others on Valentine's Day,

couples和wells用词错误，应为tulips和lilies，且on Valentine's Day前介词应为on。

× children will send connection to their mothers on Mother's Day.

✓ children will send carnations to their mothers on Mother's Day.

connection用词错误，应为carnations（康乃馨）。