Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, provide a bit more specific detail about why you like sunflowers.

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers because their bright yellow petals are cheerful and they symbolize happiness. When I'm surrounded by various colorful flowers, it always lifts my mood and makes me feel relaxed.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'planned a flower pot' and 'she always the she takes care of it'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, my sister loves flowers a lot. When we were young, she usually planted flowers in pots on our balcony and took good care of them by watering them regularly.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and unclear words like 'syrup'. Also, there are grammar errors such as 'bought flower plants and put it placed it'. Try to use correct tenses and vocabulary, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Yes, there are many flowers at our house because my mom loves gardening. She often buys flower plants and places them on our balcony, and she also grows some flowers in our garden.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repeating 'I love flowers' at the end. Also, clarify what you mean by 'put some codes on it'. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I enjoy taking photos of flowers, although not every day. Whenever I see a beautiful flower, I capture photos and videos, which I sometimes use in my TikTok videos with added effects.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more fluent. Also, avoid repeating 'often' twice.

例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to their loved ones, including family, friends, and colleagues, especially on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, Christmas, New Year's, and birthdays.

× Yes, I love flowers, especially the sunflower.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers.

The word 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' because the student is talking about flowers in general, not a single sunflower. Using the plural form matches the context of loving flowers in general.

× she always the she takes care of it by watering the plant.

✓ she always takes care of it by watering the plant.

The phrase 'she always the she takes care' contains an unnecessary repetition of the pronoun 'she'. Removing the extra 'the she' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× My mom loves flowers a lot, so she usually bought flower plants and put it placed it on our balcony.

✓ My mom loves flowers a lot, so she usually buys flower plants and places them on our balcony.

The verbs 'bought' and 'put' are inconsistent with the habitual action indicated by 'usually'. They should be in the present tense 'buys' and 'places'. Also, 'flower plants' is correct, but 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'plants'.

× She also loves planting it in our syrup.

✓ She also loves planting them in our syrup.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'plants' which is plural, so it should be 'them'. Also, 'syrup' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; if it means 'yard' or 'garden', it should be corrected accordingly. However, based on the transcript, only the pronoun is corrected here.

× I love taking photos of flowers.

✓ I love taking photos of flowers.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The verb 'love' is correctly followed by the gerund 'taking'.

× My mom loves flowers a lot, so she usually bought flower plants and put it placed it on our balcony.

✓ My mom loves flowers a lot, so she usually buys flower plants and places them on our balcony.

The verbs 'bought' and 'put' are in the past tense but the adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'buys' and 'places'.