Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但有些语法错误和用词不当，如"its"应为"their"，且句子稍显冗长。建议注意主谓一致和代词使用，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I love flowers. Whenever I visit the park near my home, I enjoy looking at their bright colors and pleasant scents because they help me relax and refresh after a busy day.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法错误和表达不清，如人称代词错误、句子不完整。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和句子完整性，使用连词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, my mom really loves flowers. She has been cultivating several plants and takes great care of them. The blooming flowers bring her joy and add a lively and energetic vibe to our home.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如"I will spring"应为"in spring"，"warding"应为"walking"，"vibrate"应为"vibrant"。建议注意时态和拼写，使用正确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, in my neighborhood, there are numerous flowers in spring, including peach blossoms and magnolias. Many people enjoy walking around and appreciating them. Their vibrant colors really uplift my mood.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，如"make makes"，"not required some technology skills"表达不准确。建议简化句子，注意语法和词汇搭配。

例: Yes, definitely. I love using my smartphone to take photos of flowers. It doesn't require advanced technical skills. Their vibrant colors and stunning shapes always make beautiful pictures that I use as my phone's wallpaper.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但有语法错误，如"graduate ceremony"应为"graduation ceremony"，"which make it unforgettable"应为"which made it unforgettable"。建议注意时态和名词搭配，提升表达准确性。

例: Yes, in my country, people usually send flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day or Teachers' Day. They also do this for weddings, birthdays, or graduation ceremonies. This year, I received a beautiful bouquet from a junior at my graduation ceremony, which made it unforgettable.

× Every time I visit the park near my home, I enjoy looking at the flowers because of its bright colors and pleasant scents, which can really help me unwind and refresh my spirits after a busy day.

✓ Every time I visit the park near my home, I enjoy looking at the flowers because of their bright colors and pleasant scents, which can really help me unwind and refresh my spirits after a busy day.

这里的flowers是复数，its是单数物主代词，应该用their来表示复数的花的颜色和气味。

× Well my mom really love flowers and he has been cultivating a several parts of and she takes great care of them every time

✓ Well, my mom really loves flowers and she has been cultivating several parts of them and she takes great care of them every time.

love应为第三人称单数形式loves；he错误地指代了mom，应改为she；a several parts中a不应与several连用，应去掉a；parts后应加of them表示她种植的部分。

× The flowers blown really breathe her joy and as a lively and energetic vibe to my home.

✓ The flowers bloom really bring her joy and add a lively and energetic vibe to my home.

blown是blow的过去分词，句中应使用现在时态bloom表示花开；breathe用法错误，应改为bring；as用法错误，应改为add。

× Yes, in my neighborhood I will spring there were numerous flowers include Peach blooms and magnolias.

✓ Yes, in my neighborhood in spring there are numerous flowers including peach blooms and magnolias.

will spring错误，应为in spring；there were应为there are表示现在存在；include应为including表示包含。

× Many people enjoy warding around them and appreciate them well.

✓ Many people enjoy walking around them and appreciate them well.

warding是拼写错误，应为walking，表示走动。

× The vibrate colors really uplift my mood.

✓ The vibrant colors really uplift my mood.

vibrate是动词，形容词应为vibrant，表示鲜艳的颜色。

× I love using my smart phones to take photos of them and I believe it is not required some technology skills.

✓ I love using my smartphone to take photos of them and I believe it does not require much technology skills.

smart phones应为单数smartphone；it is not required some technology skills语法错误，应改为does not require much technology skills。

× No matter how I catch the flowers, the vibrant colors and stunning shapes make makes beautiful pictures, which can serve as my phone's wallpaper.

✓ No matter how I catch the flowers, the vibrant colors and stunning shapes make beautiful pictures, which can serve as my phone's wallpaper.

make makes重复，应去掉makes，主语复数用make。

× Yes, in my country, people usually send flowers to others on special festivals like Valentine's Day or Teachers Day.

✓ Yes, in my country, people usually send flowers to others on special festivals like Valentine's Day or Teacher's Day.

Teachers Day应为Teacher's Day，表示教师节的所有格。

× Besides that, people usually do this on important occasions like weddings, birthdays or graduate ceremony.

✓ Besides that, people usually do this on important occasions like weddings, birthdays or graduation ceremonies.

graduate ceremony应为graduation ceremonies，表示毕业典礼的复数形式。

× This year, I got a beautiful bouquet from junior on my graduate ceremony which make it unforgettable.

✓ This year, I got a beautiful bouquet from a junior at my graduation ceremony which made it unforgettable.

junior前应加冠词a；graduate ceremony应为graduation ceremony；which make应为which made，过去时态。