Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and contains a grammatical error ('fragrance of flowers are'). Try to avoid repeating the question and use singular/plural agreement correctly. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer richer.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and their fragrance is amazing. For example, I especially enjoy the scent of jasmine and roses, which always brighten my day.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references ('they' instead of 'she'). Try to use correct singular/plural forms and pronouns. Also, avoid repeating 'a lot' and provide more specific details.

例: Yes, my sister loves flowers very much. She often plants various types of flowers in our garden, especially roses and jasmine, which are her favourites.

提案: There are some grammatical mistakes ('which are' should be 'which is', 'different type' should be 'different types'). Try to be more precise and organise your answer with linking words for clarity.

例: Yes, I live in a big house with a garden that is fully covered with different types of flowers, such as jasmine and roses, which makes the place very colourful and pleasant.

提案: There is a typo ('Lover' instead of 'flowers') and some awkward phrasing. Try to correct these errors and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers. Instead, I prefer to sit near them and enjoy their fragrance because it helps me relax and feel like I'm in another world.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing ('to another'). Try to be more precise and use linking words to explain the cultural significance clearly.

例: In my country, many people, especially Indians, often send flowers as gifts. Flowers like roses and jasmine are popular because they symbolise love and affection.

× Yes, I love flowers because they are so beautiful and the fragrance of flowers are amazing.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they are so beautiful and the fragrance of flowers is amazing.

The subject 'fragrance' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.

× Yes, my sister, she loves flower a lot and they always plant a lot of flowers in the garden.

✓ Yes, my sister, she loves flowers a lot and they always plant a lot of flowers in the garden.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers.

× They loves rose and Jasmine flower mostly.

✓ They love rose and Jasmine flowers mostly.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' instead of 'loves'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× Yes, I have a big house and there is also a garden which are fully covered by flowers like different type of flowers, Jasmine and rose.

✓ Yes, I have a big house and there is also a garden which is fully covered by flowers like different types of flowers, Jasmine and rose.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'garden' (singular), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'different'.

× No, I don't usually take photos of Lover, I prefer to simply sit near to them and enjoy their fragrance because it's helped me relax and feel like I am in another world.

✓ No, I don't usually take photos of flowers, I prefer to simply sit near them and enjoy their fragrance because it helps me relax and feel like I am in another world.

The word 'Lover' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. The preposition 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' alone is correct. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to match present tense.

× Just mostly Indian people like to send flowers to another as a gift and it is also a symbol of love between them.

✓ Mostly Indian people like to send flowers to others as a gift and it is also a symbol of love between them.

The phrase 'to another' is incorrect; it should be 'to others' to refer to other people.

× Usually people prefer to give a flower like rose and Jasmine.

✓ Usually people prefer to give flowers like rose and Jasmine.

The phrase 'a flower like rose and Jasmine' is incorrect because it refers to multiple types of flowers; it should be plural 'flowers'.