Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法有错误，如"flowers always makes"应为"flowers always make"。建议注意主谓一致，同时可以丰富细节，避免简单重复。

例: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors and delicate shapes brighten up any room. They always make me feel happy and relaxed, especially when I see fresh blooms in spring.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"my mother love"应为"my mother loves"，"can makes"应为"can make"。建议避免重复使用"Oh"，并且增加细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She has a beautiful balcony garden where she grows various kinds of flowers, which not only brighten our home but also create a peaceful atmosphere.

提案: 句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，正确表达应为"which are planted by my mother"。建议扩展内容，描述更多关于花的情况。

例: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, especially on my mother's balcony where she has planted a variety of colorful blooms that attract butterflies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如"Take these photos can makes"应为"Taking these photos makes"。建议避免重复词汇"in in"，并且丰富描述。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because their vibrant colors and intricate details are fascinating. Taking these photos helps me relax and appreciate nature's beauty.

提案: 表达不够准确，"wedding's birthday"不合适，应分开描述婚礼和生日。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并举例说明。

例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to celebrate occasions like weddings, birthdays, and various festivals as a symbol of good wishes.

× I think flowers always makes me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I think flowers always make me feel happy and relaxed.

主语flowers是复数，谓语动词make应与复数主语一致，不能加-s。

× my mother love flowers very much.

✓ my mother loves flowers very much.

主语my mother是第三人称单数，谓语动词love应加-s变为loves。

× she plants many flowers at the balcony and I think they can makes me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ she plants many flowers on the balcony and I think they can make me feel happy and relaxed.

1. 介词应为on the balcony而非at the balcony。2. 主语they是复数，情态动词can后动词用原形make，不加-s。

× there are lots of flowers which planted by my mother on the balcony.

✓ there are lots of flowers which are planted by my mother on the balcony.

定语从句中缺少系动词are，正确结构为which are planted。

× I often take photos of flowers in in my daily life because I think it's beautiful and colorful.

✓ I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think they're beautiful and colorful.

1. 重复使用介词in，应去掉一个。2. 复数flowers对应代词应为they或they're。

× Take these photos can makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ Taking these photos can make me feel very happy and relaxed.

1. 动名词taking作主语更自然。2. 情态动词can后动词用原形make，不加-s。

× people in my country often send flowers to others, especially in the wedding's birthday or other festivals.

✓ people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on weddings, birthdays, or other festivals.

1. 介词应为on用于表示特定日期或节日。2. wedding's birthday表达不正确，应分开weddings和birthdays。