Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。

例: I'm not a big fan of flowers, but I enjoy receiving them as gifts on special occasions like anniversaries or important ceremonies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复的填充词，建议减少口头语，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

例: Yes, my grandma loves flowers a lot. She grows plants like magnolia and jasmine, and she often goes to the supermarket to buy new flowers and plants.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和口头语，建议使用更准确的时态和减少重复词汇，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I live in a community where most of my neighbors are elderly, and almost every family grows flowers. When I open my window, I can see many beautiful flowers around.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, flowers give me a sense of life and energy, so I take photos whenever I see beautiful flowers on the street or near buildings. It's my way of capturing charming moments.

提案: 回答中表达重复，建议简化句子并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

例: I think it depends on age. Sending flowers is popular among younger people, but less so among the elderly. However, most people still choose flowers as gifts.

× Well, I'm not a typical flower lover but I do love to receive flowers as gift for like celebrate the anniversary and important ceremony sometimes.

✓ Well, I'm not a typical flower lover but I do love to receive flowers as gifts for celebrating anniversaries and important ceremonies sometimes.

这里gift应使用复数形式gifts，因为前面提到的是复数flowers，且anniversary和ceremony也应使用复数形式以匹配泛指多次的情况。

× Well, I'm not a typical flower lover but I do love to receive flowers as gift for like celebrate the anniversary and important ceremony sometimes.

✓ Well, I'm not a typical flower lover but I do love to receive flowers as gifts for celebrating anniversaries and important ceremonies sometimes.

动词celebrate后应使用动名词形式celebrating，且介词for后应接动名词短语，表示目的。

× Yes, my grandma loves flowers very much. Uh, not only she grows flowers uh, like Magnolia and Jasmine, uh, but also she time to time go to the supermarket to buy some new flowers and other plants.

✓ Yes, my grandma loves flowers very much. Uh, not only does she grow flowers like Magnolia and Jasmine, but she also goes to the supermarket from time to time to buy some new flowers and other plants.

这里使用了错误的主语谓语结构，not only后应使用倒装结构does she grow，且time to time前应加介词from，go动词应加第三人称单数形式goes。

× Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elder generations, so every family grow flowers.

✓ Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elderly generations, so every family grows flowers.

family作为单数集体名词，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式grows。

× Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elder generations, so every family grow flowers.

✓ Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elderly generations, so every family grows flowers.

主语every family是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式grows。

× Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elder generations, so every family grow flowers.

✓ Yes, as I live in a community where my neighbors are all, uh, elderly generations, so every family grows flowers.

elder是比较级，通常用来比较两者，形容词修饰代词时应使用elderly表示年长的。

× And uh, as I open my window to look out, I can see the flowers around me.

✓ And uh, as I open my window to look out, I can see flowers around me.

flowers前不需要定冠词the，因为这里指的是泛指的花。

× Yes, 'cause a flower gave me a sense of life and active and I took photos every time I saw beautiful flowers on the road or beside the buildings.

✓ Yes, 'cause flowers give me a sense of life and activity, and I take photos every time I see beautiful flowers on the road or beside buildings.

时态应统一为一般现在时，flower应使用复数flowers，active应改为名词activity，beside后不需要定冠词the。

× Yes, 'cause a flower gave me a sense of life and active and I took photos every time I saw beautiful flowers on the road or beside the buildings.

✓ Yes, 'cause flowers give me a sense of life and activity, and I take photos every time I see beautiful flowers on the road or beside buildings.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，且active应改为名词activity。

× Yes, 'cause a flower gave me a sense of life and active and I took photos every time I saw beautiful flowers on the road or beside the buildings.

✓ Yes, 'cause flowers give me a sense of life and activity, and I take photos every time I see beautiful flowers on the road or beside buildings.

beside后面不需要定冠词the，因为这里指的是泛指的建筑物。

× Well, I think that depends on age.

✓ Well, I think that depends on one's age.

depends on后应接具体名词或代词，age前加所有格one's更准确。

× It is popular to send flowers as gifts among younger generations, but it's not popular among the elders.

✓ It is popular to send flowers as gifts among younger generations, but it's not popular among the elderly.

elders通常指长辈的人，作为形容词应使用elderly表示年长的。