Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了对花的喜爱，但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议减少重复，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法，如"flowers is"应为"flowers are"。

例: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. They symbolize a fresh start for me, and receiving a new flower each day makes me feel motivated and positive.

提案: 回答中存在性别代词错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的代词，简洁明了地描述朋友如何喜欢花，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, one of my friends really loves flowers. She often wears them as accessories, like in her hair or on her wrist, to complement her outfits.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确。建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语化的缩写，且注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: Actually, there aren't many flowers at my home because they are easy to die. I prefer to see flowers growing naturally outdoors, where they can live longer.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy photography. Capturing these moments helps me remember the beauty around me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，并清楚表达送花的场合和感受。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers. For example, my friends usually give me a bouquet when we meet, which always makes me very happy.

× I mean, flowers is a new start of my life.

✓ I mean, flowers are a new start of my life.

flowers 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are，而不是单数形式 is。

× She's a pretty girl and she loves to wear it in his hand, in his head.

✓ She's a pretty girl and she loves to wear them in her hand, on her head.

这里指的是花，复数形式，代词应使用复数 them；且代词性别应与主语一致，使用 her 而非 his。

× she loves to wear it in his hand, in his head.

✓ she loves to wear them in her hand, on her head.

表示佩戴位置时，通常用 on 表示头部，in 表示手部不合适，应改为 in her hand, on her head。

× So. And this will bring him a new look to match her outfit or something else like that.

✓ So, this will bring her a new look to match her outfit or something else like that.

前文主语是女性，代词应保持一致，使用 her 而非 him。

× I don't wanna just have a flower on a bottle.

✓ I don't wanna just have flowers in a bottle.

表达多朵花时应使用复数 flowers；且通常花放在瓶子里，介词用 in 而非 on。

× I don't wanna just have a flower on a bottle.

✓ I don't wanna just have a flower in a bottle.

花通常放在瓶子里，介词应为 in 而非 on。

× I love to see it in a natural places.

✓ I love to see them in natural places.

places 是复数，前面的冠词 a 不应出现；且指花应使用复数代词 them。

× I love to see it in a natural places.

✓ I love to see them in natural places.

places 是复数，代词应使用复数 them，且去掉不定冠词 a。

× I do love take photos about everything around me which just impress me.

✓ I do love to take photos of everything around me which just impresses me.

动词后应加 to，表达喜欢做某事用 love to do；介词应为 of 而非 about；which 指代单数 everything，谓语动词用 impresses。

× which just impress me.

✓ which just impresses me.

which 指代单数 everything，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 impresses。

× I do love take photos about everything around me which just impress me.

✓ I do love to take photos of everything around me which just impresses me.

表达拍摄对象时，介词应为 of 而非 about。

× when times goes on some sometimes when I think of that I will turn back to seeing my photos.

✓ when time goes on, sometimes when I think of that, I will look back at my photos.

time 是单数，谓语用 goes；表达回顾照片用 look back at；句子结构需调整以更通顺。

× I will turn back to seeing my photos.

✓ I will look back at my photos.

表达回顾时，常用短语 look back at，而非 turn back to seeing。

× they will give me a brown, a bunch of flowers that will make me really happy.

✓ they will give me a brown bunch of flowers that will make me really happy.

a bunch 是一个整体，前面不应有逗号分开；brown 修饰 bunch，二者应连用。