Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and shows enthusiasm, but it is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I really like flowers' and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the types of flowers or why you like them.

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially their pleasant fragrance. I usually keep fresh flowers in my house, such as roses in the living room and lilies in the kitchen, which brighten up the space and create a welcoming atmosphere.

提案: Your answer provides relevant information but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Try to be more precise and avoid repeating phrases like 'keep them inside'.

例: Yes, my sister loves flowers, especially sunflowers because she believes they are full of energy and have a lovely scent. She also likes roses and often keeps them in her room to brighten up the space.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating phrases like 'all my all my' and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of flowers grown in your area.

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my city and neighbourhood because most people enjoy planting them. For instance, gardens often feature roses, tulips, and daisies, which add vibrant colours to the streets.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'the the' and 'have a have a'. Use linking words to explain why you like sunflowers and be more concise.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go for walks with my family. I especially like sunflowers because their bright colour and energetic appearance make for beautiful pictures.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Avoid repeating words like 'between between' and incomplete phrases like 'however and however'. Be more precise and use linking words to explain the cultural significance of sending flowers.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express their feelings. For example, roses are commonly given to show love, while tulips can symbolise friendship and affection.

× she thinks that sunflowers is full of energy and it's like it has a very nice smell

✓ she thinks that sunflowers are full of energy and it's like they have a very nice smell

The subject 'sunflowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, pronouns referring to 'sunflowers' should be plural ('they' and 'have') to agree in number.

× she often keep them inside her room or keep them inside

✓ she often keeps them inside her room or keeps them inside

The verb 'keep' must agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so it should be 'keeps'.

× Almost all my all my neighborhood people love flowers and love planting them

✓ Almost all my neighborhood people love flowers and love planting them

The phrase 'all my all my' is redundant; removing the repeated 'all my' corrects the sentence.

× So each garden in my city has different types of flowers so we grow like roses and.

✓ So each garden in my city has different types of flowers; for example, we grow roses.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding a semicolon and completing the thought improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I always stop in the street and take a photo with the the flowers

✓ I always stop in the street and take a photo of the flowers

The phrase 'take a photo with the flowers' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' when referring to photographing something. Also, 'the' is repeated twice.

× because I think they are full of energy and it has a big bright color

✓ because I think they are full of energy and they have a big bright colour

The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'sunflowers'. Also, 'have' is the correct verb for plural subjects. 'Colour' is the British English spelling.

× people can express their love to others by their giving them some flowers

✓ people can express their love to others by giving them some flowers

The possessive pronoun 'their' is unnecessary and incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'by giving them some flowers'.

× Tulip can expresses the love between between people however and however

✓ Tulips can express the love between people, however

The noun 'Tulip' should be plural 'Tulips' to match the plural verb 'can express'. Also, 'expresses' should be 'express' after modal 'can'. The repeated word 'between' and 'however' is redundant and removed for clarity.