Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you love flowers?
受験者
I really love flowers such as roses, however I don't know how to garden because I have never have a garden.
試験官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
受験者
Yes, I know that many members of my family really enjoy flowers. For example, my mom used to buy flowers every week.
試験官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
受験者
Yes, I think there are many flowers where I live because it's a small town near Paris. It's not exactly the countryside, but there are many flowers and a forest nearby.
試験官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
受験者
No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life, even though I really love to take photos. I think the reason is that flowers are ephemeral to me and I don't like to capture them.
試験官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
受験者
Yes, I think in France many people send flowers to other because you have many events. For example, we have Father's Day, Mother's Day, Valentine's Day, and it's a ritual to send flowers.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
スコア: 75.0提案: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être plus naturelle et fluide. Évitez les répétitions comme "I have never have" et essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie d'un détail. Par exemple, commencez par exprimer votre amour pour les fleurs, puis expliquez pourquoi vous ne jardinez pas.
例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. However, I have never had a garden, so I don't know how to take care of them.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
スコア: 85.0提案: Votre réponse est bonne mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en utilisant des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées. Par exemple, utilisez "for instance" ou "such as" pour introduire un exemple.
例: Yes, many members of my family really enjoy flowers. For instance, my mom used to buy flowers every week.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
スコア: 80.0提案: Votre réponse est pertinente mais pourrait être plus concise et naturelle. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente, par exemple "although" pour introduire une idée contrastée.
例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because it's a small town near Paris. Although it's not exactly the countryside, there are plenty of flowers and a forest nearby.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
スコア: 85.0提案: Votre réponse est claire et bien structurée. Pour l'améliorer, vous pouvez utiliser des mots de liaison comme "although" ou "because" pour mieux connecter vos idées et enrichir votre réponse.
例: No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life, although I really love photography. I think it's because flowers are ephemeral, and I prefer to enjoy them without capturing them.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
スコア: 80.0提案: Votre réponse est bonne mais pourrait être améliorée en corrigeant la grammaire et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour une meilleure cohérence. Par exemple, utilisez "because" correctement et introduisez les exemples avec "such as".
例: Yes, in France, many people send flowers to others because there are many special occasions, such as Father's Day, Mother's Day, and Valentine's Day. Sending flowers is a common tradition on these days.
文法
× I really love flowers such as roses, however I don't know how to garden because I have never have a garden.
✓ I really love flowers such as roses, however I don't know how to garden because I have never had a garden.
The error is the incorrect use of 'have' instead of the past participle 'had' after 'have never'. The present perfect tense requires the past participle form of the verb. The correct form is 'have never had'.
× Yes, I think in France many people send flowers to other because you have many events.
✓ Yes, I think in France many people send flowers to others because there are many events.
The pronoun 'other' is incorrect here; it should be the plural form 'others' to refer to other people. Also, 'you have many events' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'there are many events' to indicate the existence of events.
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