Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议注意冠词的使用（如'a beautiful flower'而非'a beautiful flowers'），避免句子冗长且不完整。可以尝试用简洁的句子表达观点，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they can brighten up my day. For example, receiving a flower always makes me feel happy and appreciated. Moreover, flowers add beauty to the world around us.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如单复数不一致（'a big fans'应为'a big fan'），句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性，使用完整句子，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: My mother is a big fan of flowers. She plants many different types on our balcony. Whenever I see them, I feel relaxed and happier because flowers bring joy to our lives.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（'plans'应为'plants'），语法错误（'give'应为'gives'），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和主谓一致，使用完整句子，并具体描述花的数量和种类。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mom plants colorful and beautiful flowers on our balcony, which brighten the area and provide a relaxing place for us.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'It's depends'应为'It depends'），表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容流畅。

例: It depends. When I see a special or very beautiful flower, I take photos and share them on social media. However, I usually don't photograph common flowers like roses because they are very common.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，如'formal conversations'应为'formal occasions'，句子不完整且用词不当。建议使用准确词汇，表达完整且连贯的句子，具体说明送花的场合和意义。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like weddings or graduations. Sending flowers is a way to show appreciation, gratitude, and congratulations.

× I like flowers very much A beautiful flowers can brighten your days and I think receiving a flower can make me happy.

✓ I like flowers very much. Beautiful flowers can brighten your days and I think receiving a flower can make me happy.

句子中 'A beautiful flowers' 中 'flowers' 是复数，前面的冠词 'A' 应用于单数名词，造成单复数不一致。应去掉 'A' 或改为单数形式。

× My mother is a big fans of the flowers.

✓ My mother is a big fan of the flowers.

'fans' 是复数形式，但主语 'My mother' 是单数，主谓不一致，应使用单数 'fan'。

× She plants lots of different types of flowers on our balconies and whenever time I see the flowers on the balcony I feel relax and happier.

✓ She plants lots of different types of flowers on our balconies and whenever I see the flowers on the balcony I feel relaxed and happier.

'whenever time' 用法错误，应去掉 'time'。'feel relax' 中 'relax' 应为形容词 'relaxed'。

× Yes, my mom plans a lot of flowers on our balconies and they are colorful and beautiful.

✓ Yes, my mom plants a lot of flowers on our balconies and they are colorful and beautiful.

此句中 'plans' 应为 'plants'，但这属于词汇错误，不在语法问题列表中，故不改。

× It brightens our platforms and give us some place to for relax.

✓ It brightens our platforms and gives us some place to relax.

'give' 应与主语 'It' 一致，改为 'gives'。'to for relax' 介词使用错误，应为 'to relax'。

× It's depends, when I see something special or definitely beautiful I will take photos and share it on the social media.

✓ It depends, when I see something special or definitely beautiful I will take photos and share them on social media.

'It's depends' 中 'It's' 不应与 'depends' 连用，应为 'It depends'。

× Some common flowers like rose, all the simple.

✓ Some common flowers like roses are all simple.

'rose' 应为复数 'roses'，且句子结构不完整，补充谓语。

× Especially in some special occasions like formal conversations or graduations, people will send them flowers to show appreciation and gratitude.

✓ Especially on some special occasions like formal conversations or graduations, people will send flowers to show appreciation and gratitude.

'send them flowers' 中 'them' 多余，应去掉。

× Especially in some special occasions like formal conversations or graduations, people will send them flowers to show appreciation and gratitude.

✓ Especially on some special occasions like formal conversations or graduations, people will send flowers to show appreciation and gratitude.

'in some special occasions' 应为 'on some special occasions'，介词使用错误。

× And I think flower is a good thing to contain this meaningful.

✓ And I think flowers are a good thing to contain this meaning.

'flower' 应为复数 'flowers'，谓语 'is' 应改为复数 'are'。'meaningful' 应为名词 'meaning'。