Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子稍显复杂，建议简化表达并避免过长句子，使回答更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up a room and make the air fresher by producing oxygen.

提案: 回答内容有些重复且部分表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意用词准确。

例: My father loves flowers and has turned our balcony into two greenhouses. However, I don't like flowers much because they attract bugs and mosquitoes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够准确，建议注意单复数和介词使用，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my father grows various plants from different parts of the world on our balcony.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议使用更简单明了的句子，并注意时态和词汇准确。

例: Sometimes I take photos of flowers, especially when I don't know their names. I use an app on my phone to identify them.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误（conditions应为flowers或bouquets），且表达不够自然，建议注意词汇准确性并简化句子。

例: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions. For example, I give my mother a big bouquet on Mother's Day and roses on Valentine's Day.

× He loves cultivating all kinds of plants and has transformed our bookings into two greenhouses where he plants and turns his plants and flowers.

✓ He loves cultivating all kinds of plants and has transformed our balconies into two greenhouses where he plants and tends his plants and flowers.

原句中“bookings”应为“balconies”，因为“bookings”意为预订，不符合语境。应使用复数形式“balconies”表示阳台。

× But I don't like them because I think they attract a lot of bugs and mosquitoes in.

✓ But I don't like them because I think they attract a lot of bugs and mosquitoes.

“attract ... in”是不正确的搭配，动词“attract”后不需要加介词“in”。

× so our balconies have a lot of plants and flowers that come from different corner around the world.

✓ so our balconies have a lot of plants and flowers that come from different corners around the world.

“corner”应使用复数形式“corners”，因为指多个不同的角落。

× It's on case by case basis.

✓ It depends on the case.

原句结构不完整且表达不准确，正确表达应为“It depends on the case.”表示“这取决于具体情况”。

× So when we look some special flowers, I just cancel using my cell phone.

✓ So when we see some special flowers, I just use my cell phone to take pictures.

“look some special flowers”应改为“see some special flowers”，且“cancel using my cell phone”表达不清，应改为“use my cell phone to take pictures”。

× For instance, I gift a larger bouquet of conditions to my mother on Mother's Day, but roses in different colors may be a better choice in Valentine's Day.

✓ For instance, I gift a larger bouquet of carnations to my mother on Mother's Day, but roses in different colors may be a better choice on Valentine's Day.

“conditions”应为“carnations”（康乃馨），且“in Valentine's Day”应改为“on Valentine's Day”，介词使用错误。

× but roses in different colors may be a better choice in Valentine's Day.

✓ but roses in different colors may be a better choice on Valentine's Day.

节日日期前应使用介词“on”，而非“in”。