Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“love lover”和“beauty of lover”，应注意单词拼写和搭配。同时，回答较为含糊，缺乏具体细节，建议直接表达观点并补充具体原因。

例: I don't consider myself a big fan of flowers, but I do appreciate their beauty. For example, I like roses and tulips because they have vibrant colors and pleasant scents.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构重复且缺少连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意单复数形式。

例: Yes, one of my friends loves flowers. She often sends me photos of different flowers, enjoys receiving them as gifts, and frequently buys flowers for herself.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，如“pretty lot”、“in the in the”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达，并增加具体细节。

例: Yes, there are many flowers near my home. In spring and summer, trees bloom beautifully, and nearby gardens have a variety of seasonal flowers.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，如“when I was traveling”应为一般现在时或现在完成时，且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't take photos of flowers every day like my friends, but I do take pictures when I see beautiful flowers, especially during spring or when I'm traveling or walking around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有小的语法错误，如“Mother's Days”应为“Mother's Day”，且句子可以更简洁。建议注意节日名称的正确表达，并适当简化句子。

例: People in my country don't usually send flowers regularly, but they often give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, Mother's Day, Father's Day, and Valentine's Day to show love and appreciation.

× I'm not going to say say I'm a love lover.

✓ I'm not going to say I'm a flower lover.

这里的'love lover'是错误的，应该是'flower lover'，因为题目是关于花的。'love lover'没有意义。

× I do appreciate the beauty of lover, but I just can name only a few kinds of flower so I wouldn't say I love them.

✓ I do appreciate the beauty of flowers, but I can only name a few kinds of flowers so I wouldn't say I love them.

'beauty of lover'应为'beauty of flowers'，'flower'应为复数'flowers'，因为这里指的是多种花。

× I think one of my friends she loves flower because she sends me photos of flowers every day, she enjoys receiving flowers from others and she buys flowers for herself very often.

✓ I think one of my friends loves flowers because she sends me photos of flowers every day, she enjoys receiving flowers from others and she buys flowers for herself very often.

'loves flower'应为'loves flowers'，因为flower需要复数形式表示一般意义上的花。

× Yes, there's a pretty lot near my neighbor.

✓ Yes, there are quite a lot near my neighbor.

'there's a pretty lot'结构错误，应该用复数形式'there are quite a lot'，表示数量较多。

× There's often some trees which bloom in the in the spring and summer and there are also some garden they they have seasonal flowers in it.

✓ There are often some trees which bloom in the spring and summer, and there are also some gardens that have seasonal flowers in them.

'some garden'应为复数'some gardens'，'they they'重复错误，改为'that'引导定语从句，'in it'应为'in them'，因为指复数。

× I take photos of flowers when I was traveling or take taking a walk around my neighbor.

✓ I take photos of flowers when I am traveling or taking a walk around my neighborhood.

'when I was traveling'时态不匹配，应该用现在进行时'when I am traveling'，'take taking'重复错误，改为'taking'，'neighbor'应为'neighborhood'表示社区。

× If in spring they're really beautiful and I take photos of flowers when I was traveling or take taking a walk around my neighbor.

✓ In spring, they're really beautiful and I take photos of flowers when I am traveling or taking a walk around my neighborhood.

句首应为'In spring'，'neighbor'应为'neighborhood'，时态应保持一致。

× Yes when I see them really beautiful, I'll take a picture.

✓ Yes, when I see them really beautiful, I'll take a picture.

句首缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Umm, I don't think they send flowers to each other as a habit, but they do give other flowers in special occasions such as birthdays, Mother's Days, Father's Day, and Valentine's Day.

✓ Umm, I don't think they send flowers to each other as a habit, but they do give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, Mother's Day, Father's Day, and Valentine's Day.

'give other flowers'中的'other'多余，应去掉；'in special occasions'应为'on special occasions'，介词错误；'Mother's Days'应为单数'Mother's Day'。