Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“feed some flowers”和“wash them in the sunlight”，应使用更准确的表达。此外，回答较长且有些冗余，建议简洁明了地表达观点。

例: Yes, I love flowers and enjoy looking at them, but I don't usually grow them myself. My mother, however, enjoys planting and taking care of flowers on our balcony.

提案: 回答结构较好，但表达稍显重复且不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复前文内容。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She has planted many beautiful flowers on our balcony at home.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“plenty flowers”应为“plenty of flowers”，“my mother like”应为“my mother likes”。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配，同时避免重复“flowers”。

例: Yes, there are plenty of flowers in my house, including the living room, bedroom, and balcony. My mother likes to decorate these rooms with flowers, so they are everywhere.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“take photos to the flowers”和“every flowers look like us the same”。建议简化句子，表达清楚自己的观点。

例: No, I rarely take photos of flowers because I think they all look similar, so I don't find it necessary.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误“regretness”和语法错误“there must appears”。建议注意拼写和主谓一致，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to express feelings like appreciation, love, or apology. For example, weddings are usually decorated with many flowers to celebrate the occasion.

× Yes, there are plenty flowers in my house, in my living room, in my bedroom and in the balcony.

✓ Yes, there are plenty of flowers in my house, in my living room, in my bedroom and on the balcony.

这里缺少介词“of”，短语应为“plenty of flowers”，表示“许多花”。另外，“in the balcony”应改为“on the balcony”，因为阳台通常用介词“on”。

× And my mother like to decorate these rooms with flowers, so there's flowers everywhere.

✓ And my mother likes to decorate these rooms with flowers, so there are flowers everywhere.

主语是第三人称单数“my mother”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“likes”。另外，“there's flowers”应改为“there are flowers”，因为flowers是复数。

× For example, in someone's wedding, there must appears a lot of flowers to celebrate.

✓ For example, in someone's wedding, there must appear a lot of flowers to celebrate.

情态动词“must”后应接动词原形，不能加-s或其他形式，故“appears”应改为“appear”。