Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'flower' nên là 'flowers') và tránh lặp từ như 'feel' nhiều lần. Bạn có thể sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they always brighten my day. For instance, whenever I see colorful flowers, I feel cheerful and relaxed. Moreover, especially in spring when everything is blooming, flowers have a special way of making me feel happy and calm.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'rose' nên là 'roses', 'he find' nên là 'he finds'). Thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, my younger brother loves flowers very much. He enjoys gardening and often spends time planting different kinds of flowers, especially roses and sunflowers, because he finds them beautiful and relaxing.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều (ví dụ: 'flower' nên là 'flowers', 'garden' nên là 'gardens') và sử dụng dấu phẩy hoặc từ nối để câu rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời có thể thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để phong phú nội dung.

例: Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live because I live in the countryside. The area is full of well-planned gardens and colorful flowers, which make the environment very beautiful and peaceful.

提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn có thể thay 'in my real life' bằng 'in my daily life' hoặc 'regularly' để chính xác hơn. Thêm từ nối để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find them very beautiful and calming. Whenever I unlock my phone, I like to see these pictures as they remind me of nature and make me feel relaxed.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'other' nên là 'others', 'birthday' nên là 'birthdays', 'sometime' nên là 'sometimes'). Câu cuối hơi lủng củng, nên tách thành hai câu hoặc dùng từ nối để rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays or weddings. For example, students sometimes give flowers to their teachers to show appreciation, which is a common way to express gratitude.

× Especially in spring when everything is blooming, flower have a special way of making me feel happy and calm.

✓ Especially in spring when everything is blooming, flowers have a special way of making me feel happy and calm.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with the plural verb 'have'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× He enjoys gardening and often spends time planting different kinds of flowers, especially rose and sunflowers, because he find them beautiful and relaxing.

✓ He enjoys gardening and often spends time planting different kinds of flowers, especially roses and sunflowers, because he finds them beautiful and relaxing.

'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'sunflowers' and the plural context. Also, 'he find' should be 'he finds' to agree with the third person singular subject. This involves singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issues.

× He enjoys gardening and often spends time planting different kinds of flowers, especially rose and sunflowers, because he find them beautiful and relaxing.

✓ He enjoys gardening and often spends time planting different kinds of flowers, especially roses and sunflowers, because he finds them beautiful and relaxing.

The verb 'find' should be 'finds' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. This is a third person singular issue.

× Yes, there are a lot of flower where I live because I live in the countryside.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live because I live in the countryside.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the quantifier 'a lot of'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× The area is full of well planned garden and colorful flowers which makes the environment very beautiful and peaceful.

✓ The area is full of well planned gardens and colorful flowers which make the environment very beautiful and peaceful.

'Garden' should be plural 'gardens' to match the plural 'flowers'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'gardens and flowers'. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement.

× The area is full of well planned garden and colorful flowers which makes the environment very beautiful and peaceful.

✓ The area is full of well planned gardens and colorful flowers which make the environment very beautiful and peaceful.

The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'gardens and flowers'. This is a third person singular issue.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to other on special occasions like birthday or wedding.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

The word 'other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. Also, 'birthday' and 'wedding' should be plural 'birthdays' and 'weddings' to refer to general occasions. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and quantifiers.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to other on special occasions like birthday or wedding.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

'Birthday' and 'wedding' should be plural to refer to multiple occasions. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For example, students sometime give flowers to their teacher to show appreciation is a common way to express gratitude.

✓ For example, students sometimes give flowers to their teachers to show appreciation; it is a common way to express gratitude.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'students'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by separating the two ideas with a semicolon. This involves singular/plural and sentence structure issues.