Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法有错误，如makes应为make，且句子较长且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并且避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and fragrant. They make me feel happy and relaxed, especially when I use them to decorate my home or give them as gifts to friends.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和词汇错误（如boat应为bunch）。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much, especially red roses. I often buy her a bunch of flowers as gifts during festivals, and she always appreciates them.

提案: 回答不完整，句子未结束，且缺少具体细节。建议完整回答问题，列举具体花卉种类，并表达个人偏好。

例: Yes, there are many flower shops near my home where I can buy various flowers such as roses, lilies, and chamomile. Among them, I prefer lilies because of their pleasant scent.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅，如"I like take photo"应为"I like to take photos"。建议使用连贯句子，明确表达拍照的原因和分享的方式。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers at home because I enjoy their beauty. I like to share these photos on my social media to show my friends.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如"doing different festival"应为"during different festivals"，"a bottle of"用词错误。建议完整表达，使用正确词汇和句式。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts during different festivals. For example, on Mother's Day or birthdays, I usually buy a bouquet of flowers to give to my mother.

× They always makes me feel happy and relaxed, especially when I buy them to decorate my home or give them as gifts to my friends for.

✓ They always make me feel happy and relaxed, especially when I buy them to decorate my home or give them as gifts to my friends.

主语是复数的"They"，谓语动词应使用复数形式"make"，而不是单数形式"makes"。此外，句尾的"for"多余，应删除。

× especially red rose and if I buy a boat of flowers in someone festivals as a gift to her, she will.

✓ especially red roses, and if I buy a bouquet of flowers on someone's festivals as a gift to her, she will be very happy.

"red rose"应为复数形式"red roses"，表示多朵玫瑰。"boat"应为"bouquet"，意为花束。"someone festivals"应为"someone's festivals"，表示某人的节日。句子不完整，需补充谓语。

× Yes, there are many flower stores where I live and I can buy different type of flowers such as rose lilies or chamomile and so on, but I prefer.

✓ Yes, there are many flower stores where I live and I can buy different types of flowers such as roses, lilies, or chamomile and so on, but I prefer lilies.

"different type"应为复数形式"different types"，因为指多种类型。花名词应为复数形式，如"roses"和"lilies"。句子末尾不完整，需补充喜欢的花种。

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I really have fresh flowers at home. Not only I like flowers but also I like take photo to share. So I for example I often share my social media.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I really have fresh flowers at home. Not only do I like flowers, but I also like to take photos to share. For example, I often share them on my social media.

"Not only I like"应改为"Not only do I like"，使用倒装结构。"like take photo"应为"like to take photos"。"share my social media"应为"share them on my social media"，正确使用介词和代词。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others as gifts doing different festival. For example, when on the Mother's Day or her birthday, I will buy a bottle of.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others as gifts during different festivals. For example, on Mother's Day or her birthday, I will buy a bouquet of flowers.

"doing different festival"应为"during different festivals"，正确使用介词。"when on the Mother's Day"应为"on Mother's Day"。"a bottle of"应为"a bouquet of flowers"，正确表达花束。