Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. Try to use a more natural sentence structure and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I have loved flowers for 20 years."

例: Yes, I have loved flowers for 20 years because they brighten up any room and make me feel happy.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by combining the sentences and adding a reason or example to enrich the response. Use linking words to make it more coherent.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much because she enjoys gardening and finds it relaxing.

提案: Good direct answer with supporting detail. To improve, try to use linking words and more specific descriptions to make your answer more natural and engaging.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my hometown has a large park filled with colourful blossoms throughout the year.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks detail. Try to avoid repeating the same words and add reasons or examples to make your answer more interesting and natural.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy capturing their beauty and sharing them with my friends on social media.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear, complete sentence and provide specific occasions when people send flowers. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries.

× Yes I do, I have love with flowers for 20 years.

✓ Yes I do, I have loved flowers for 20 years.

The phrase 'have love with flowers' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have loved flowers' to indicate a continuous feeling over a period of time. Also, 'have loved' is the present perfect tense, which is appropriate here to express an action or feeling that started in the past and continues to the present.

× Yes I do, I have love with flowers for 20 years.

✓ Yes I do, I have loved flowers for 20 years.

The verb 'have' should be followed by the past participle 'loved' to form the present perfect tense, which is used to describe an action or state that began in the past and continues to the present. Using 'love' (present tense) here is incorrect.

× Or when someone's birthday in my top country.

✓ Or when it's someone's birthday in my country.

The original sentence lacks a verb and has an unclear phrase 'my top country'. The corrected sentence adds the verb 'is' contracted as 'it's' and replaces 'my top country' with 'my country' for clarity and grammatical correctness.