Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, hãy nói về lý do bạn thích hoa và cảm xúc khi nhận hoa một cách mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I definitely like flowers because they are a symbol of love. When someone gives me flowers, their sweet fragrance cheers me up and makes me feel happy.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về người bạn biết yêu hoa, ví dụ như mẹ bạn thích hoa và có hoa trong nhà.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She always keeps fresh flowers in our home and even in my room.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề và giải thích cụ thể hơn về tình trạng hoa ở nơi bạn sống, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: No, there are not many flowers where I live. There are more trees because people often destroy flowers to make space for work or other activities.

提案: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và nói rõ hơn về lý do không chụp ảnh hoa.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life because I am a student and I spend most of my time studying for university entrance exams.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích khi nào người ta tặng hoa và cho ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially boys giving flowers to girls on holidays or special celebrations as gifts.

× Yes, I definitely like a flower because when people give me a flower which is a symbol of love an.

✓ Yes, I definitely like flowers because when people give me a flower, it is a symbol of love.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a flower' when referring generally to flowers. 'Flowers' is the correct plural form to express general liking. Also, 'an' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary. The sentence is corrected to use plural 'flowers' and proper sentence structure.

× And they have unsweet fragnance that it gave me cheer phone an emotional rate.

✓ And they have a sweet fragrance that gives me cheer and an emotional feeling.

The phrase 'unsweet fragnance' is incorrect; 'sweet fragrance' is the correct adjective-noun combination. 'Cheer phone an emotional rate' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'gives me cheer and an emotional feeling' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm a person who LA Flowers is my mom.

✓ The person who loves flowers is my mom.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It seems the student intended to say 'My mom is a person who loves flowers.' The correction clarifies the subject and verb structure.

× She's away by love foul in my home and.

✓ She loves flowers at home.

'Away by love foul' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition to express location is 'at'. The sentence is simplified to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× In my in my room have a refreshments about a flowers.

✓ In my room, there are some flowers for decoration.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Refreshments about a flowers' is incorrect. The correction uses 'there are some flowers' to indicate presence and 'for decoration' to clarify purpose.

× No. Where I live is in there have a lot of tree than a flower because many people always want to destroy.

✓ No. Where I live, there are more trees than flowers because many people often destroy flowers.

The original sentence misuses 'is in there have'. The correct structure is 'there are'. Also, 'a lot of tree than a flower' should be 'more trees than flowers' to compare quantities properly.

× To destroy the flower by to work out to work in that.

✓ They destroy flowers when they work in that area.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions. The correction clarifies the meaning using proper prepositions and sentence structure.

× Now I don't usually take a photo of flower in a daily life because I am still student so I don't have enough time to do anything like that.

✓ Now I don't usually take photos of flowers in daily life because I am still a student and don't have enough time to do that.

'A photo of flower' should be plural 'photos of flowers' to indicate general activity. 'In a daily life' is incorrect; 'in daily life' or 'in my daily life' is correct. Also, 'I am still student' needs the article 'a' before 'student'.

× I spend most my time to study to practice in a university entrance exam.

✓ I spend most of my time studying and practicing for the university entrance exam.

The phrase 'spend most my time to study to practice' is incorrect. The correct form is 'spend most of my time studying and practicing'. Also, 'in a university entrance exam' should be 'for the university entrance exam'.

× Yes, uh, people in my country often send follow two other like to the boy GIF.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, like giving flowers to boys.

'Send follow two other like to the boy GIF' is unclear and incorrect. 'Follow' should be 'flowers', 'two other' should be 'to others', and 'GIF' is likely 'gift'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× A flower for the girl like on in.

✓ They give flowers to girls on special occasions.

The original phrase is incomplete and uses incorrect prepositions. The correction uses 'give flowers to girls on special occasions' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× A holiday are. Any celebrate too. Have a gift they elite.

✓ On holidays or any celebrations, they give gifts.

The original sentences are fragmented and use incorrect words and prepositions. The correction combines the ideas into a clear sentence with proper prepositions and vocabulary.