Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc tốt, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tránh lỗi như 'gifted me flowers' nên là 'give me flowers'. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ 'like'.

例: Yes, I absolutely adore flowers. I especially love it when people give me flowers on special occasions such as my birthday or graduation. Moreover, I often choose flowers as gifts for others on their special days because I believe everyone appreciates them.

提案: Bạn trả lời có nội dung rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'flowers that my mom was bought' nên là 'flowers that my mom bought'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: If I have to say, it would be my mom because she loves flowers even more than I do. In every room of our house, there are different types of flowers, such as roses and lilies, which she has bought herself. This shows how much she really loves flowers.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'which is had no end' không đúng, nên nói 'which is very large'. Ngoài ra, cần dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi như 'people don't plans' nên là 'people don't plant'.

例: I live in the capital city of Vietnam, which is very large. However, the environment is not very good due to heavy air pollution. As a result, people don't plant many flowers, and if they do, the flowers usually die within a week or two.

提案: Bạn trả lời tự nhiên nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'a flower shops' nên là 'a flower shop' hoặc 'flower shops'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'just'.

例: Of course, I often take photos of flowers whenever I see them on the street or pass by flower shops. I feel that the variety of colors and the way flowers grow really brighten my day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'each others' nên là 'each other'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'like'.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, for example on birthdays or graduations. Flowers are a popular choice because they are easy to buy and look really beautiful.

× Like I love it when people gifted me flowers on my special occasions like my birthday or when I'm graduating.

✓ Like I love it when people gift me flowers on my special occasions like my birthday or when I'm graduating.

The verb 'gifted' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. The sentence describes a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'gift' should be used instead to indicate repeated or general actions.

× And I also choose flowers to give to someone on their special days because I think everyone will like flowers.

✓ And I also choose flowers to give to someone on their special day because I think everyone will like flowers.

The phrase 'special days' should be singular 'special day' because 'someone' refers to a single person, so the possessive 'their' refers to one person's special day, not multiple days.

× She would adore flowers more than me.

✓ She would adore flowers more than I do.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but can be improved for clarity by adding 'I do' to complete the comparison properly.

× Uh, in every room of our house there is a type of flowers like roses or Lily.

✓ Uh, in every room of our house there is a type of flower like roses or lilies.

The phrase 'a type of flowers' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and should be followed by the singular noun 'flower'. Also, 'Lily' should be pluralized to 'lilies' to match 'roses'.

× It's all the flowers that my mom was bought and I think that she really loves flower.

✓ Those are all the flowers that my mom bought and I think that she really loves flowers.

The phrase 'was bought' is incorrect passive past tense; it should be active past tense 'bought'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× Well, I live in capital city of Vietnam which is had no end.

✓ Well, I live in the capital city of Vietnam which seems to have no end.

The phrase 'which is had no end' is ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'which seems to have no end' to convey the intended meaning properly.

× I would say that the environment here is not very good, like there's a lot of air pollution so people don't plans many flowers and if they do the flowers will die in like a week or two.

✓ I would say that the environment here is not very good, like there's a lot of air pollution so people don't plant many flowers and if they do, the flowers will die in like a week or two.

The verb 'plans' is incorrect; it should be 'plant' to indicate the action of growing flowers. Also, a comma is needed after 'if they do' for clarity.

× Of course I do, whenever I see flowers like on the street or when I pass by a flower shops, I always take a photo of those flowers because I just felt like it just brighten my day when I see the variety of colors of flowers and how it's like growing.

✓ Of course I do, whenever I see flowers like on the street or when I pass by flower shops, I always take a photo of those flowers because I just feel like it brightens my day when I see the variety of colors of flowers and how they are growing.

The verb 'felt' should be present tense 'feel' to match the habitual action. 'Brighten' should be 'brightens' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'A flower shops' is incorrect; it should be 'flower shops'. Also, 'how it's like growing' is awkward and corrected to 'how they are growing'.

× Yes, I think people in my country really like sending flowers to each others, for example on birthday or like when we when we are graduating, people always choose flowers to give to each others because it's like easy to buy and also it's just really beautiful.

✓ Yes, I think people in my country really like sending flowers to each other, for example on birthdays or when we are graduating, people always choose flowers to give to each other because it's easy to buy and also it's just really beautiful.

The phrase 'each others' is incorrect; the correct form is 'each other'. 'On birthday' should be plural 'on birthdays' to indicate general occasions. The repeated phrase 'when we when we' is corrected to a single 'when we'. 'It's like easy' is corrected to 'it's easy' for proper expression.