Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简短且缺乏细节，建议增加具体原因或感受，使回答更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I'm not a big fan of flowers because I find them high maintenance and I don't really understand their varieties.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且部分句子不连贯，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, my wife loves flowers. She buys fresh flowers every weekend to decorate our home, which makes the atmosphere more colorful and cheerful.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议组织完整句子，明确描述花的数量和分布情况。

例: There are not many flowers around where I live. However, my wife buys flowers every week to decorate our home, and some flowers are also planted in the building's garden.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，且有语法错误，建议使用连词连接句子并纠正错误。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not very interested in them. Instead, I prefer photographing architecture or landscapes.

提案: 回答内容混乱且有语法错误，建议理清思路，使用完整句子并具体说明送花的场合。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, birthdays, Chinese New Year, and Women's Day. Flowers are also commonly given when visiting patients to wish them a speedy recovery.

× Oh my wife really loves flowers and every weekend she will buy some flowers to decorate our home.

✓ Oh, my wife really loves flowers and every weekend she buys some flowers to decorate our home.

这里的动词时态和主语一致问题，'every weekend'表示习惯动作，应该用一般现在时，故将'will buy'改为'buy'。

× It makes me makes our home more color for and can make you feel better and.

✓ It makes our home more colorful and can make you feel better.

'more color for'是不正确的表达，应该用形容词'colorful'来修饰'home'，且句子中多余的'makes me'应删除。

× To a good mood, I think.

✓ I think it puts you in a good mood.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Not too much, not too many.

✓ Not too many.

'flowers'是可数名词，应该用'not too many'而不是'not too much'。

× At home, as I mentioned my wife.

✓ At home, as I mentioned, my wife usually buys some flowers every week.

原句不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整表达。

× Usually every week by some flowers.

✓ Usually every week buys some flowers.

'by'应为'buy'，且句子缺少主语，需改为完整句子。

× Says for just for home but to property.

✓ She says it's just for home but also for the property.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需调整使其完整。

× The whole building is.

✓ The whole building is decorated.

句子不完整，缺少谓语，需补充完整。

× I prefer. Taking pictures for architectures or some RP's.

✓ I prefer taking pictures of architecture or some places.

'pictures for architectures'用法错误，正确搭配是'taking pictures of architecture'，且'RP's'不明确，改为'places'更合适。

× Yes, it is true, especially some special holidays like Valentine's Day's birthday as well.

✓ Yes, that's true, especially on special holidays like Valentine's Day and birthdays.

'Valentine's Day's birthday'表达错误，应分开表达，且'it is true'改为'that's true'更自然。

× Anne. Chinese New Year or women stay especially the holidays for women for girls we will always send flowers even sometimes when we visit some patients with.

✓ And Chinese New Year or Women's Day, especially holidays for women and girls, we always send flowers, even sometimes when we visit some patients.

句子结构混乱，介词使用错误，需调整语序和介词，使句子通顺。