Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as "put in my love" and "take up photos." Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I love flowers. I usually buy some to put in my living room, and I enjoy taking photos of them. I like watching their colors and smelling their fragrance.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form clear sentences with correct grammar and provide specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, my neighbor loves flowers. She buys different kinds every weekend and arranges them beautifully in her garden.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more natural and engaging.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, when I walk near my house, I can easily see colorful flowers blooming in gardens and parks.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "put a camera too" and "I am wrote that." Try to use simple and correct sentences, and explain your habits clearly.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers every day. I always carry my camera and sometimes share the pictures on my social media accounts.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural by correcting grammar and adding linking words. Also, clarify the purpose of sending flowers.

例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to others on special occasions, such as Mother's Day or birthdays. They usually buy flowers to express their feelings and make the day special.

× I usually buy some flowers to put in my love and I take up photos.

✓ I usually buy some flowers to put in my home and take photos.

The phrase 'put in my love' is incorrect; it should be 'put in my home' or 'put in my room'. Also, 'take up photos' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take photos'. The verb 'take' does not need 'up' here.

× Yes, I know she is my neighbor, I always so she bought some flowers.

✓ Yes, I know she is my neighbor; I always see that she buys some flowers.

The sentence is a run-on and has incorrect verb usage. 'I always so' should be 'I always see'. Also, 'she bought some flowers' should be in present tense 'she buys some flowers' to match the habitual action.

× Every weekend she bought, she bought.

✓ Every weekend she buys flowers.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. It should be simplified to 'Every weekend she buys flowers' to express habitual action.

× Every different flowers to the Great Hollow.

✓ She brings different flowers to the Great Hollow every time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a subject and verb clarifies the meaning.

× Take porras of flowers and sometimes I am wrote that.

✓ I take photos of flowers and sometimes I write about them.

'Take porras' is a typo and should be 'take photos'. 'I am wrote' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I write'. Present tense is appropriate here.