Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ihre Antwort ist verständlich, aber die Grammatik und Satzstruktur sind fehlerhaft. Versuchen Sie, klarere und grammatikalisch korrekte Sätze zu bilden, und vermeiden Sie unnötige Wörter. Verwenden Sie außerdem Verbindungswörter, um Ihre Antwort flüssiger zu machen.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and color to any place. For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they brighten up the room.

提案: Ihre Antwort enthält viele Fehler und unvollständige Sätze. Achten Sie darauf, vollständige und korrekte Sätze zu bilden. Verwenden Sie auch passende Präpositionen und vermeiden Sie Wortwiederholungen.

例: Yes, I know a close friend who absolutely loves flowers. She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends planting and caring for different types of flowers in her backyard.

提案: Die Antwort ist unvollständig und enthält viele Fehler. Versuchen Sie, vollständige Sätze zu bilden und Ihre Ideen klar zu verbinden. Verwenden Sie Verbindungswörter, um die Antwort logisch zu strukturieren.

例: Yes, there are many beautiful flowers where I live, especially in public parks and gardens. For example, the streets are lined with colorful blossoms like tulips and roses, which really brighten up the area.

提案: Ihre Antwort ist schwer verständlich und enthält viele Fehler. Versuchen Sie, Ihre Gedanken klar und grammatikalisch korrekt auszudrücken. Verwenden Sie Verbindungswörter, um Ihre Ideen zu verbinden und Beispiele klar zu machen.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and shapes beautiful. For example, when I walk in the park or visit gardens, I like to take close-up shots to capture their delicate details.

提案: Die Antwort ist unverständlich und enthält viele Fehler. Achten Sie auf korrekte Grammatik und Wortwahl. Versuchen Sie, Ihre Antwort klar und präzise zu formulieren und Beispiele logisch zu erklären.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays and weddings. Flowers are considered a beautiful way to express emotions like love and appreciation.

× Yes, I do love flowers be 'cause they had beauty and color to any.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because they have beauty and color to any.

The verb 'had' is in the past tense, but the sentence is about a general truth, so the present tense 'have' should be used. Also, 'be 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'.

× And re warrant for example, I enjoying having fresh flowers at home.

✓ For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home.

The phrase 'I enjoying' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be in the base form 'enjoy' after the subject 'I'.

× She enjoys garden and often spends her weekends planting and caring for different types of flowers in your. Baker.

✓ She enjoys gardening and often spends her weekends planting and caring for different types of flowers in her backyard.

The noun 'garden' should be the gerund 'gardening' after 'enjoys'. Also, 'in your. Baker' is incorrect; it should be 'in her backyard'.

× Yes, there are beautiful flowers around to where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

✓ Yes, there are beautiful flowers around where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context; 'around where I live' is correct.

× For example, doing spin. Their streets are lined with colorful blossoms like tulips and roses, which. Really bring up.

✓ For example, their streets are lined with colorful blossoms like tulips and roses, which really brighten up the area.

The phrase 'doing spin.' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity and completeness.

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and the shapes were beautiful, for example, when I walk in the park or wrist gardens.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and shapes beautiful, for example, when I walk in the park or visit gardens.

The phrase 'the shapes were beautiful' mixes tenses and is incorrect; it should be 'shapes beautiful'. Also, 'wrist gardens' is likely a mishearing or typo and should be 'visit gardens'.

× And like kept in close up shots 2. Applicate there. Dedicate details.

✓ I like to keep close-up shots to appreciate their delicate details.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words and prepositions. It should be rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, people in my country often sent flowers to others on special customs such as birthdays, wedding and inner ISM.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries.

The verb 'sent' is past tense but should be present tense 'send' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'customs' should be 'occasions', and 'inner ISM' is likely a mishearing of 'anniversaries'.

× Flowers are seen as thrown in beautiful way to express emotions. Mike Love.

✓ Flowers are seen as a beautiful way to express emotions like love.

The phrase 'thrown in beautiful way' is incorrect; it should be 'a beautiful way'. Also, 'Mike Love' is likely a mishearing of 'like love'.