Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I buy fresh flowers every week to decorate my room and living room. They make the space feel alive and cozy, and seeing them always lifts my spirits.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，建议直接回答问题并用连贯的句子补充细节，避免重复。

例: Actually, I am the one who loves flowers the most. I buy fresh flowers every week to decorate my home because they create a warm and cozy atmosphere.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达更清晰。

例: Not really, because I live in a city where there aren't many flowers around, except for the flower shop downstairs. However, in spring, some neighborhoods have beautiful flower beds that are nice to see.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意词汇使用和句子结构。

例: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but when I see beautiful and gorgeous flowers, I like to take pictures of them because they make me feel refreshed and happy.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用正确的句子结构和词汇，清晰表达观点。

例: Compared to Western countries, flower-giving culture here is not very common. People usually send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, or when someone is in the hospital.

× I buy flowers every wake and decorate some decorate my room and living room ways flowers.

✓ I buy flowers every week and decorate my room and living room with flowers.

这里的“wake”应为“week”，是拼写错误，且“some decorate my room and living room ways flowers”结构混乱，应改为“decorate my room and living room with flowers”，使句子通顺且符合复数形式的使用。

× It's just makes the whole space alive and cozy and it put me in high spirits when I say them.

✓ It just makes the whole space alive and cozy and it puts me in high spirits when I see them.

“It's just makes”中“It's”多余，应为“It just makes”；“put”应为第三人称单数“puts”；“say them”应为“see them”，因为这里表达的是看到花使心情好。

× Loves flowers. Exactly, I think it's me.

✓ I love flowers. Exactly, I think it's me.

“Loves flowers.”缺少主语，应补充“I”使句子完整。

× I buy flowers fresh flowers every week to decorate my room and living room because it makes the whole space more cozy and.

✓ I buy fresh flowers every week to decorate my room and living room because it makes the whole space cozier.

“flowers fresh flowers”重复，应删去一个“flowers”；“more cozy and.”结构不完整，应改为“cozier”表示比较级。

× Is supply a cozy atmosphere?

✓ It supplies a cozy atmosphere.

句子缺少主语，应加“It”作为主语，动词用第三人称单数形式“supplies”。

× Not really a living city so there are not many flowers round if you unless you count the flower shop downstairs.

✓ Not really a living city, so there are not many flowers around unless you count the flower shop downstairs.

“round if you”应为“around unless you”，修正拼写和连接词，使句子通顺。

× But during spring some neighborhoods have later flower beds which are nice to see.

✓ But during spring some neighborhoods have flower beds which are nice to see.

“later flower beds”不合适，应去掉“later”，保持句意清晰。

× I do take photos of follow flowers but not every day.

✓ I do take photos of flowers but not every day.

“follow flowers”应为“flowers”，拼写错误。

× When I say beautiful and gorgeous flowers I will take photos for them and saying the make me absolutes and I will feel more fresh and happier.

✓ When I see beautiful and gorgeous flowers, I will take photos of them and saying they make me feel absolutely fresh and happier.

“say”应为“see”；“for them”应为“of them”；“saying the make me absolutes”结构错误，应为“saying they make me feel absolutely”；“more fresh”应为“absolutely fresh”或“feel fresh”。

× Compared with Western countries at say the flower culture here is not that crazy like people do send flowers for birthday anniversary's are hospital with AIDS.

✓ Compared with Western countries, I would say the flower culture here is not that crazy. People do send flowers for birthdays, anniversaries, or hospital visits.

“at say”应为“I would say”；“birthday anniversary's”应为“birthdays, anniversaries”；“are hospital with AIDS”应为“or hospital visits”，修正介词和表达。

× But is something it's not something super often it's just something special occasion thing.

✓ But it is something special; it's not something that happens super often, just on special occasions.

句子结构混乱，应补充主语“it”，并调整句子使其通顺。