Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use singular/plural forms correctly and keep your answer concise and natural. For example, say "Whenever I have free time, I like to buy some flowers to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful."

例: Yes, I love flowers. Whenever I have free time, I like to buy some flowers to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful.

提案: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure your sentences are coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, my mum loves flowers very much. She often buys fresh flowers to decorate our house because she believes they create a cheerful and relaxing atmosphere. Seeing the flowers always makes her feel happy and calm."

例: Yes, my mum loves flowers very much. She often buys fresh flowers to decorate our house because she believes they create a cheerful and relaxing atmosphere. Seeing the flowers always makes her feel happy and calm.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "Actually, there are few flowers where I live now because I am really busy with work and have less time to buy and take care of them."

例: Actually, there are few flowers where I live now because I am really busy with work and have less time to buy and take care of them.

提案: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I like flowers, but I don't usually take photos of them in daily life. However, sometimes when a flower looks particularly beautiful, I may take a picture to capture the moment."

例: I like flowers, but I don't usually take photos of them in daily life. However, sometimes when a flower looks particularly beautiful, I may take a picture to capture the moment.

提案: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure are important. Use the correct verb "send" instead of "stand" and complete your sentences. For example, "Yes, I think people in my country often send flowers to others. My friends always send flowers as birthday gifts."

例: Yes, I think people in my country often send flowers to others. My friends always send flowers as birthday gifts.

× When I whenever I have free time, I like to buy some flower to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I like buying some flowers to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful.

The phrase 'like to buy' is acceptable but 'like buying' is more natural when expressing a habitual action. Also, 'some flower' should be plural 'some flowers' because 'flower' is countable and plural is needed here.

× When I whenever I have free time, I like to buy some flower to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I like to buy some flowers to decorate my living room because they make the space feel more cheerful.

The noun 'flower' is countable and should be plural 'flowers' when referring to more than one. Using singular 'flower' here is incorrect.

× Yes, my mom loves flower very much.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers very much.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× They all them buys fresh flowers in her spelled hand to decorate our house because she believes the created a cheerful and relaxing automotive field.

✓ She always buys fresh flowers in her local market to decorate our house because she believes they create a cheerful and relaxing atmosphere.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrases. 'They all them' is incorrect; 'she always' is correct. 'Spelled hand' is unclear and replaced with 'local market'. 'The created' is incorrect; 'they create' is correct. 'Automotive field' is incorrect; 'atmosphere' fits the context.

× They all them buys fresh flowers in her spelled hand to decorate our house because she believes the created a cheerful and relaxing automotive field.

✓ She always buys fresh flowers in her local market to decorate our house because she believes they create a cheerful and relaxing atmosphere.

The verb 'buys' agrees with singular subject 'she'. 'Flowers' is plural and correct here. The phrase 'they create' refers to plural 'flowers'.

× Actually, now there are little flowers where I live because are you really busy with my work and I have less time to buy flowers and take care of that.

✓ Actually, now there are few flowers where I live because I am really busy with my work and I have less time to buy flowers and take care of them.

'There are little flowers' is incorrect; 'few flowers' is correct for countable nouns. 'Are you really busy' is incorrect; should be 'I am really busy'. 'Take care of that' should be 'take care of them' referring to flowers.

× Also I I like flowers but I don't like take photos of done in my daily life.

✓ Also, I like flowers but I don't like taking photos of them in my daily life.

After 'like', the verb should be in '-ing' form: 'like taking'. 'Take photos of done' is incorrect; 'them' refers to flowers.

× Also I I like flowers but I don't like take photos of done in my daily life.

✓ Also, I like flowers but I don't like taking photos of them in my daily life.

The pronoun 'done' is incorrect here; 'them' correctly refers to flowers.

× However, sometimes window automatic field feels special for the flower looks particularly beautiful.

✓ However, sometimes the natural environment feels special because the flowers look particularly beautiful.

'Window automatic field' is unclear and incorrect; replaced with 'natural environment'. 'Feels special for the flower looks' is incorrect; 'feels special because the flowers look' is correct.

× I may take a picture to capture the moment.

✓ I may take a picture to capture the moment.

This sentence is correct; no changes needed.

× Yes, I think people in my country often stand flowers to others.

✓ Yes, I think people in my country often send flowers to others.

The verb 'stand' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'send' when referring to giving flowers to others.

× My friends always stand flowers as birthday gift.

✓ My friends always send flowers as birthday gifts.

'Stand' should be 'send'. Also, 'birthday gift' should be plural 'birthday gifts' to match 'flowers'.