Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，例如“roses past”和“keep hearing”不正确。建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式，并且回答要更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. Sometimes I buy roses to decorate my house because they are very beautiful and last a long time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“post”应为“posts”，以及“very hearing”表达不清。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并且表达更具体。

例: Yes, a high school friend of mine loves flowers. She posts pictures of different flowers on social media every week because she finds them very beautiful.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“near river”应为“near the river”，可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I live in an apartment near the river. There are many kinds of flowers along the riverbank, and their bright colors always make me feel cheerful.

提案: 回答基本清晰，但“show them on moments”表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers I see by the roadside and sometimes share them on social media.

提案: 回答中“Not really”和“No in daily life”表达不够完整，建议使用完整句子并丰富内容。

例: Not really. In China, people usually express love in subtle ways and tend to send flowers only on special occasions like Valentine's Day or birthdays, rather than in daily life.

× I like roses past.

✓ I liked roses in the past.

这里的 'past' 用法不正确，应该用短语 'in the past' 来表示过去的时间，且动词时态应为过去式 'liked'，因为表达的是过去的喜好。

× They are very beautiful and keep hearing.

✓ They are very beautiful and keep blooming.

'keep hearing' 语义不通，应该是 'keep blooming'（持续盛开），这里是形容花的状态，使用动词 'bloom' 的现在分词形式。

× She post pictures of her flowers on moments every week.

✓ She posts pictures of her flowers on Moments every week.

主语是第三人称单数 'She'，动词应加 -s 变为 'posts'，且 'Moments' 是微信朋友圈的专有名词，应大写。

× All kinds of flowers are very hearing.

✓ All kinds of flowers are very beautiful.

'hearing' 用法错误，应该用形容词 'beautiful' 来描述花的美丽。

× I live in an apartment near river.

✓ I live in an apartment near the river.

'river' 前需要加定冠词 'the'，因为这里指特定的河流。

× No in daily life.

✓ No, not in daily life.

句子缺少否定词 'not'，且需要逗号分隔，表示否定回答。