Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子不连贯。建议注意语法正确性，避免断句错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they can brighten up my day and make me feel happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For example, I love them because they brighten our mood and help us feel relaxed.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但缺少更多细节和连接词。建议增加具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In fact, my bedroom is full of flowers because I often buy them to decorate the space and create a pleasant atmosphere.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，且句子不连贯。建议注意语法和句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I often go out specifically to take photos of flowers because it brightens my day and helps me relax.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但用词和句式较为简单。建议丰富词汇，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, in my country, many people often send flowers to their loved ones or when visiting patients to express their care and good wishes.

× I think most of girls love flowers too because flowers can make us feel. Happenes.

✓ I think most girls love flowers too because flowers can make us feel happy.

“most of girls”中“girls”前不需要“of”，应为“most girls”。另外，“Happenes”拼写错误，应为“happiness”或用“happy”形容词。这里用“happy”更合适。

× I think it varies from person to person, but for me I love flowers very much because they can brighten our more and make us feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I think it varies from person to person, but for me I love flowers very much because they can brighten our mood and make us feel happy and relaxed.

“brighten our more”中“more”用词错误，应为“mood”，表示“心情”。

× Yes, of course, I usually go out in purpose of taking photos of flowers because it can bring me some. Bright and make me relax.

✓ Yes, of course, I usually go out for the purpose of taking photos of flowers because it can bring me some brightness and make me relax.

“go out in purpose of”应改为“go out for the purpose of”，表示“为了……目的”。“some. Bright”应连成“some brightness”，表示“一些光亮”。

× Yes, many people often send flowers to their lovers or visiting the patient in my country.

✓ Yes, many people often send flowers to their lovers or visit patients in my country.

“visiting the patient”结构错误，应改为“visit patients”，动词形式和复数形式要正确。