Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，确保表达清晰自然。

例: Yes, I love flowers. I buy different kinds every week to decorate my living room. They brighten up the space and make it feel lively.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用简单句子表达自己的喜好，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I often buy various flowers to decorate my living room and bedroom. They make the rooms look lively and cozy, which helps me relax.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，建议简洁明了地说明情况，并使用正确的词汇。

例: Not many flowers grow where I live because I live in a town with limited space. People don't plant many flowers here due to lack of gardens.

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达不够流畅，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更准确。

例: No, I don't often take photos of flowers because I am usually busy with work. However, sometimes when I see beautiful flowers in a garden, I take photos to refresh my mind.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议简洁明了地说明花卉送礼的习惯，并举例说明。

例: No, people in my country don't send flowers as often as in Western countries. We usually send flowers only on special occasions like holidays or as gifts.

× Yes, absolutely I you relate to buy different flowers every week to direct to my living room and flowers lightened up the whole space that I own and so is really make the everything light and and.

✓ Yes, absolutely I usually buy different flowers every week to decorate my living room, and flowers lighten up the whole space that I own, so they really make everything bright and lively.

句中“flowers lightened up”应为一般现在时“flowers lighten up”，且“make the everything light and and”结构混乱，应改为“make everything bright and lively”。此外，“I you relate to buy”不合语法，应为“I usually buy”。这是复数名词和动词形式不一致的问题。

× Yeah, I think is me. I'm the kind of person who loved flowers so much and IR rated by variars flowers to write to my living room and main my room. Looks very alive in the cozi and relaxed me.

✓ Yeah, I think it's me. I'm the kind of person who loves flowers so much and is attracted by various flowers to decorate my living room and main my room. It looks very alive and cozy and relaxes me.

“I think is me”缺少主语和谓语，应为“I think it's me”。“who loved flowers”时态应为一般现在时“who loves flowers”。“IR rated by variars flowers”应为“is attracted by various flowers”。“Looks very alive in the cozi”缺少主语，应为“It looks very alive and cozy”。这是单复数和主谓一致的问题。

× Well, not really because I'm living in a Tom and people in CD don't. You are late to plant a lots of flowers because the error has no allows space for AIDS. But is well.

✓ Well, not really because I'm living in a town and people in CD don't usually plant a lot of flowers because the area doesn't allow space for plants. But it's okay.

“a Tom”应为“a town”，“a lots of flowers”应为“a lot of flowers”，“the error has no allows space for AIDS”应为“the area doesn't allow space for plants”。这是单复数和词汇错误问题。

× Uh no, not often because I always busy with my work and I have few time to take photos for such small things. But sometimes when I see the beautiful flowers in the garden I will take photos for them to refreshing my.

✓ Uh no, not often because I am always busy with my work and I have little time to take photos of such small things. But sometimes when I see beautiful flowers in the garden, I will take photos of them to refresh myself.

“I always busy”缺少be动词，应为“I am always busy”。“I have few time”应为“I have little time”。“take photos for such small things”应为“take photos of such small things”。“to refreshing my”应为“to refresh myself”。这是情态动词和动词形式使用错误。

× No, no, it's quite often compared with Western countries because in our country we just sent flowers in special occasions such as volunteers days Anne knew were cities or just for state as a gift to send them.

✓ No, no, it's not quite often compared with Western countries because in our country we just send flowers on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, anniversaries, or just as a gift to send to them.

“sent flowers in special occasions”应为“send flowers on special occasions”。“volunteers days Anne knew were cities”应为“Valentine's Day, anniversaries”。“just for state as a gift to send them”结构混乱，应为“just as a gift to send to them”。这是介词使用错误和词汇错误。