Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'they smells too good' say 'they smell very good'. Also, replace 'And it. Blooms my mood' with a clearer phrase like 'They brighten my mood.'

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and they smell very good. Moreover, they brighten my mood whenever I see them.

提案: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar. The phrase 'she thinks that the pregnancy is very good' is unclear and likely incorrect. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'My mother loves flowers because she believes they bring positivity, and she has planted many in our garden.'

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers because she believes they bring positivity and happiness. Therefore, she has planted many flowers in our garden.

提案: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Correct 'Smith too good' to 'smell very good'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, 'There are many flowers like roses and sunflowers in my neighborhood because they smell very good and look beautiful. Also, flowers are often given as gifts to loved ones.'

例: Yes, there are many flowers like roses and sunflowers in my neighborhood because they smell very good and look beautiful. Additionally, people often give flowers as gifts to their loved ones.

提案: Good content and structure, but correct minor errors and improve coherence. Replace 'lovers' with 'flowers'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. For example, 'I often take photos of flowers, such as roses and sunflowers, because I enjoy capturing their vibrant colors and delicate shapes. It makes me feel relaxed and connected to nature, so I also upload these pictures on social media.'

例: I often take photos of flowers, such as roses and sunflowers, because I enjoy capturing their vibrant colors and delicate shapes. It makes me feel relaxed and connected to nature, so I also upload these pictures on social media.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, in India, people often send flowers to their loved ones because it is a beautiful way to express their feelings. Roses, especially red and pink ones, symbolize love and affection. People give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or festivals.'

例: Yes, in India, people often send flowers to their loved ones because it is a beautiful way to express their feelings. Roses, especially red and pink ones, symbolize love and affection. People give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or festivals.

× they smells too good

✓ they smell too good

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'smell' without 's' to agree in number. In English, plural subjects take the base form of the verb without 's'. Please ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× And it. Blooms my mood

✓ And it brightens my mood

The phrase 'blooms my mood' is incorrect and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely that flowers improve or brighten the mood. 'Brightens my mood' is a correct expression. Also, the period after 'it' is misplaced. Please use appropriate verbs and correct punctuation for clarity.

× my mother loves flower

✓ my mother loves flowers

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower. When talking about things in general, plural form is used. Please use plural nouns when referring to multiple items.

× she had planted many flowers in a garden

✓ she has planted many flowers in the garden

The past perfect 'had planted' is not appropriate here as the context is present relevance. Present perfect 'has planted' is better to indicate an action completed recently or with present effect. Also, 'a garden' should be 'the garden' if referring to a specific garden. Use present perfect for recent past actions relevant now.

× there are many flowers like rose, sunflower

✓ there are many flowers like roses, sunflowers

The examples 'rose' and 'sunflower' should be plural 'roses' and 'sunflowers' to match 'many flowers'. When giving examples of multiple items, use plural forms. Please ensure consistency in number.

× because they. Smith too good

✓ because they smell too good

The word 'Smith' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'smell'. Also, the period after 'they' is misplaced. The correct phrase is 'because they smell too good'. Please check for typos and correct punctuation.

× I often take photos of lovers whenever I see beautiful ones like rose sunflowers

✓ I often take photos of flowers whenever I see beautiful ones like roses and sunflowers

The word 'lovers' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. Also, 'rose sunflowers' is incorrect; it should be 'roses and sunflowers'. Please use correct nouns and conjunctions to list items properly.

× And I also upload this pictures on social media

✓ And I also upload these pictures on social media

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular, but 'pictures' is plural. The correct plural form is 'these'. Please match pronouns in number with the nouns they refer to.

× people often sent flowers to their loved ones

✓ people often send flowers to their loved ones

The adverb 'often' indicates habitual action, so the present tense 'send' is appropriate, not past tense 'sent'. Please use present tense for habitual actions.

× because it is the beautiful way to express their feeling

✓ because it is a beautiful way to express their feelings

The article 'the' is incorrect here; 'a' is appropriate for one of many ways. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to refer generally. Please use correct articles and plural forms for general statements.

× Roses, especially in colors like red and pink and. It symbolizes love and affection

✓ Roses, especially in colors like red and pink, symbolize love and affection

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect punctuation. 'It' is unnecessary and incorrect as 'roses' is plural, so the verb should be 'symbolize'. Please ensure subject-verb agreement and proper sentence structure.

× You can give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings or festival

✓ You can give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or festivals

The word 'festival' should be plural 'festivals' to match the list. Also, commas are needed before 'or' in lists for clarity. Please use plural forms and proper punctuation in lists.