Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary mistakes, and the meaning is unclear in parts. Try to use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I love flowers because of their fragrance. They have a sweet smell that many people enjoy, especially roses, which are very special."

例: Yes, I love flowers because of their fragrance. They have a sweet smell that many people enjoy, especially roses, which are very special.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar errors. Try to speak clearly and organize your ideas. For example, say "Yes, my mother loves flowers. She likes many kinds, but her favorite is the rose because of its strong fragrance."

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She likes many kinds, but her favorite is the rose because of its strong fragrance.

提案: Your answer has unclear words and grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear and simple explanation. For example, say "No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in Antarctica, which is very cold and has harsh weather, so flowers cannot grow well."

例: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in Antarctica, which is very cold and has harsh weather, so flowers cannot grow well.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to speak simply and clearly. For example, say "Even though there are not many flowers where I live, I like to take photos of flowers. Sometimes, when I go outside the city, I take pictures of flowers and nature's beauty."

例: Even though there are not many flowers where I live, I like to take photos of flowers. Sometimes, when I go outside the city, I take pictures of flowers and nature's beauty.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear words. Try to use correct grammar and clear vocabulary. For example, say "No, people in my country do not often give flowers openly. However, they sometimes give flowers on special occasions, like weddings or Valentine's Day, to their partners."

例: No, people in my country do not often give flowers openly. However, they sometimes give flowers on special occasions, like weddings or Valentine's Day, to their partners.

× Yes, I do the flowers because of the fragrance of the flowers.

✓ Yes, I like flowers because of the fragrance of the flowers.

The phrase 'do the flowers' is incorrect. The verb 'do' is not used with 'flowers' in this context. The correct verb is 'like' to express preference or love for flowers.

× The flowers always give us a sweet pregnant that everyone loves and there is some kind of flowers that are special love which is rose.

✓ The flowers always give us a sweet fragrance that everyone loves, and there are some kinds of flowers that are especially loved, such as the rose.

The word 'pregnant' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fragrance'. Also, 'some kind of flowers' should be pluralized to 'some kinds of flowers'. 'Special love' should be 'especially loved' to correctly describe the flowers.

× Yes there is a person who loved flowers and her name is Sue my after my a specially she loved the one various kind of flower but she liked the most in the flower which has hard smell like rose.

✓ Yes, there is a person who loves flowers and her name is Sue. She especially loves various kinds of flowers, but she likes the flowers that have a hard smell, like roses, the most.

The verb tense should be present tense 'loves' to match the current state. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be broken into clearer sentences. 'Various kind' should be 'various kinds'. 'Hard smell' is unclear; likely intended 'strong smell' or 'hard smell' meaning strong scent.

× No, they're not that much flower where I live because I live in Antarctica which is a city and the there is no comfort zone for flowers because the atmosphere not Dettmer software is quite a harsh weather and environment not the suitable for flowers.

✓ No, there are not that many flowers where I live because I live in Antarctica, which is not a city, and there is no comfortable zone for flowers because the atmosphere is quite harsh and the environment is not suitable for flowers.

'They're not that much flower' is incorrect; it should be 'there are not that many flowers' to agree in number. 'Antarctica which is a city' is incorrect; Antarctica is a continent, not a city. 'Dettmer software' seems to be a misheard phrase and is omitted. 'Not the suitable' should be 'not suitable'.

× Although where I live there not dismiss powers but I love to take photos of flowers because I love flowers and sometimes when I go to the outside of myself side of the city I tried to take photos and including the flowers and the beauty of nature.

✓ Although where I live there are not many flowers, I love to take photos of flowers because I love them. Sometimes when I go outside the city, I try to take photos including flowers and the beauty of nature.

'There not dismiss powers' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'there are not many flowers'. 'Myself side of the city' is incorrect; corrected to 'outside the city'. 'I tried' should be 'I try' to match present tense. 'Including the flowers' is better as 'including flowers'.

× No, in my country people don't give a flowers openly but they sometimes they give vocationally, like waiting as a wedding gift and also in Valentine's Day they casually give flowers to their girlfriend or their boyfriends.

✓ No, in my country people don't give flowers openly, but sometimes they give them on occasions, like weddings as a gift, and also on Valentine's Day they casually give flowers to their girlfriends or boyfriends.

'Give a flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Vocationally' is incorrect; the intended word is 'occasionally' or 'on occasions'. 'Waiting as a wedding gift' is incorrect; corrected to 'weddings as a gift'. 'Girlfriend or their boyfriends' should be 'girlfriends or boyfriends'.