Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте простые предложения, чтобы выразить свои чувства к цветам и объяснить, почему они вам нравятся. Избегайте повторений и неясных выражений.

例: Yes, I love flowers. I often plant them in my garden because they help me relax and improve my mood.

提案: Ответ должен быть более понятным и логичным. Используйте связные предложения, чтобы описать, кто любит цветы и почему. Избегайте непонятных слов и фраз.

例: Yes, my grandparents love flowers because they find gardening relaxing and enjoyable.

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и содержательным. Используйте простые и понятные предложения, чтобы описать наличие цветов в вашем районе и ваше отношение к ним.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I enjoy seeing them because they make the environment beautiful and pleasant.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Объясните, почему вы не фотографируете цветы, и упомяните, что вы видите фотографии цветов в интернете.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers, but I often see many beautiful flower photos on the internet because many people like them.

提案: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Используйте правильные слова и структуру предложений, чтобы объяснить, кому и почему люди дарят цветы в вашей стране.

例: Yes, in my country, people often give flowers as gifts to friends, boyfriends, girlfriends, and during special occasions to show affection and improve relationships.

× Yes, I didn't like flowers and flowers plant in my garden often I likes.

✓ Yes, I didn't like flowers and often I liked planting flowers in my garden.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'likes' instead of the past tense 'liked' and 'plant' instead of 'planting'. The verb tense should be consistent in the past tense to match 'didn't like'. Use 'liked' for past simple and 'planting' as the gerund form after 'liked'.

× See in flower this is relax me and up my emergency.

✓ Seeing flowers relaxes me and lifts my mood in emergencies.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'See in flower this' is incorrect word order. The verb 'relax' needs to agree with the singular subject 'seeing flowers' as 'relaxes'. 'Up my emergency' is unclear; 'lifts my mood in emergencies' is a clearer expression.

× Oh no, I don't know. But often this is a grand father and grandmother because he.

✓ Oh no, I don't know. But often it is my grandfather and grandmother because of him.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used; 'it' is appropriate for referring to a situation. 'Grand father' should be 'grandfather'. The phrase 'because he' is incomplete; 'because of him' is correct to indicate reason.

× Want relax White this one and this is fun for him in the damn.

✓ He wants to relax with this and finds it fun in the garden.

'Want relax White this one' is incorrect; it should be 'wants to relax with this one'. 'In the damn' is likely a misspelling of 'in the garden'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× Yes Sir, my live a lot of flowers.

✓ Yes Sir, there are a lot of flowers where I live.

The sentence lacks the existential 'there are' to indicate presence. 'My live' is incorrect; it should be 'where I live'. 'There are' is used to state existence of plural nouns.

× I really like flowers in the eye.

✓ I really like flowers to look at.

'In the eye' is an incorrect phrase here. The intended meaning is likely 'to look at' or 'to see'. Pronoun and phrase usage must be appropriate to context.

× Come him really money my times.

✓ They really cheer me up many times.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Come him really money my times' does not make sense. A possible intended meaning is that flowers cheer the speaker up often.

× And then this is so wonderful.

✓ And they are so wonderful.

'This' is singular, but referring to flowers which are plural, so 'they' is correct.

× Really likes flowers in my garden example.

✓ I really like flowers in my garden, for example.

The sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect verb form 'likes' instead of 'like'. Adding 'I' as subject and correcting verb form improves clarity.

× No, I can't take photos in my life for flowers, but I often see photos flower in a Internet.

✓ No, I don't take photos of flowers in my life, but I often see photos of flowers on the Internet.

'Can't' is incorrect here; the speaker means they do not take photos, not that they are unable. 'Photos flower' should be 'photos of flowers'. Preposition 'on' is used with 'the Internet'.

× But. Because more people likes for the flowers.

✓ Because many people like flowers.

'More people likes for the flowers' is incorrect. 'Many people like flowers' is the correct quantifier and verb agreement.

× Yes, in my country often are people gifts, floors.

✓ Yes, in my country people often give flowers as gifts.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Are people gifts, floors' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'people often give flowers as gifts'.

× Uh, some example flat friends an boyfriends, girlfriends and in observation and improve relationship white.

✓ For example, friends, boyfriends, girlfriends, and during celebrations to improve relationships.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Flat friends' is likely 'friends'. 'In observation' should be 'during celebrations'. 'White' is incorrect here. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.