Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏完整句子和具体细节。建议用完整句子表达自己的喜好，并说明原因或具体情况。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my home and make me feel happy. However, I rarely visit flower shops due to my busy schedule.

提案: 回答含糊且不连贯，缺乏具体信息和逻辑。建议直接回答问题，并给出具体例子或理由。

例: Yes, I know some friends who love flowers, especially my sister. She often receives flowers on special occasions.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体描述。建议用完整句子描述居住环境中的花卉情况。

例: There are not many flowers around where I live, but there is a flower shop downstairs that sells fresh flowers every day.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显简单。建议增加原因说明，使回答更丰富。

例: No, I usually don't take photos of flowers because I prefer photographing my pets, especially dogs, as they are more lively and interesting.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，缺乏具体细节。建议用完整句子说明送花的习俗和场合。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers during special holidays, such as Valentine's Day and Mother's Day, to express their love and appreciation.

× I like flowers. Find. I hardly go to a flower store by flower.

✓ I like flowers. Fine. I hardly go to a flower store to buy flowers.

原句中“Find”应为“Fine”，且“by flower”应为“to buy flowers”，句子结构不完整且用词错误，需调整使句子通顺。

× I don't know anyone that loves flowers pods.

✓ I don't know anyone who loves flowers.

“that”用于指代人时不如“who”准确，且“flowers pods”不合适，应简化为“flowers”。

× I guess. Some girls will. Speaker asked if they receive them.

✓ I guess some girls will. The speaker asked if they receive them.

原句断句不当，导致意思不清，应合并句子并补充主语使句子完整。

× No pad. Yeah, is a flower store downstairs. I can't say every day.

✓ No, not really. Yes, there is a flower store downstairs. I can't say I go there every day.

“No pad”无意义，应为“No, not really”。“Yeah, is a flower store downstairs”缺少主语，应补充“there”。“I can't say every day”缺少宾语，需补充完整。

× No, I won't take photos of flowers. Pass.

✓ No, I don't take photos of flowers. Sorry.

此处表达习惯用一般现在时表示习惯行为，“won't”表示拒绝或将来意愿不合适。“Pass”用法不当，应使用“Sorry”表达拒绝。

× I will take photos. Of pets like dogs and cats, especially dogs.

✓ I will take photos of pets like dogs and cats, especially dogs.

句子被错误断开，应合并为一句完整句子。

× People in our country often sunflowers.

✓ People in our country often send flowers.

“sunflowers”是名词，原句应为动词“send flowers”，表达送花的意思。

× In. A particular particular holidays. Like. Like those for couples and moms?

✓ On particular holidays, like those for couples and moms.

句子断裂且重复“particular”，应合并并使用正确介词“on”表示特定节日。