Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ một cách ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh dùng cụm từ như "I don't have a good mood for geography" mà nên dùng cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

例: I didn't enjoy geography much in high school because I found it hard to remember facts about my country. However, I understand its importance in learning about the world.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu trả lời có thể tự nhiên hơn và tránh dùng từ "conducive" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản, phù hợp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Although I haven't studied geography much, I believe it is useful because it helps us understand our country's culture and traditions better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "I didn't spend much time" hai lần. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng dùng từ vựng đa dạng hơn.

例: I didn't focus much on geography in high school because I prioritized subjects like maths and science. However, as I grew older, I became more interested in learning about different countries and cultures.

提案: Bạn có lỗi phát âm hoặc đánh máy khi nói "geography T-shirt" thay vì "teacher". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và không tự nhiên. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at remembering geographical facts. I prefer to work in accounting and auditing.

提案: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác như "if you have more time" thay vì "if I have more time". Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác về ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, if I have more time, I will definitely learn more about the geography and cultures of other countries to satisfy my curiosity.

× I didn't spend much time on studying geography, so I was not good at remembering geographical information of our country.

✓ I didn't spend much time studying geography, so I was not good at remembering geographical information about our country.

The phrase 'on studying' is incorrect here; the verb 'spend' is followed directly by the gerund without 'on'. Also, 'information of our country' should be 'information about our country' to use the correct preposition.

× I was not good at remembering geographical information of our country.

✓ I was not good at remembering geographical information about our country.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect in this context; 'information about' is the correct collocation to indicate the subject of the information.

× Even though I don't study geography a lot, I still believe that geography is important and conducive in order to understand cultural identity and traditional heritage of our country.

✓ Even though I don't study geography a lot, I still believe that geography is important and conducive to understanding the cultural identity and traditional heritage of our country.

The phrase 'conducive in order to understand' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'conducive to understanding' because 'conducive' is followed by 'to' plus a gerund.

× I didn't spend much time studying geography when I was a student at high school because I focused mostly on subjects such as maths, physics and biology to prepare for my final examination.

✓ I didn't spend much time studying geography when I was a student at high school because I focused mostly on subjects such as math, physics, and biology to prepare for my final examination.

The word 'maths' is British English; if the context is American English, 'math' is preferred. Also, commas are needed in the list for clarity.

× Honestly, I don't want to be a geography T-shirt because I don't study and don't have a good memory of any geographical information.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't study it and don't have a good memory of any geographical information.

'T-shirt' is a typo for 'teacher'. Also, 'don't study' should be followed by the object 'it' to clarify what is not studied.

× Yes, certainly, if you have more time, I will definitely learn more other different countries and cultures in order to satisfy my curiosity towards this world.

✓ Yes, certainly, if I have more time, I will definitely learn more about different countries and cultures in order to satisfy my curiosity about this world.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to match the subject. Also, 'learn more other different countries' is incorrect; it should be 'learn more about different countries'. The preposition 'about' is needed after 'learn more'. 'Curiosity towards' should be 'curiosity about'.