Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式回答问题。

例: I don't like geography very much because I found it difficult in junior school. For example, I struggled to understand concepts like wind direction.

提案: 回答内容较为简略且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并且用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供更具体的例子。

例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand important global issues, such as climate change and the diversity of mountains around the world.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并且清晰表达自己的感受，避免重复。

例: Yes, I studied geography in junior high and high school. However, I didn't do well because I found the subject confusing.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议简化表达，直接回答问题并说明原因，避免使用不正确的词汇。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I didn't do well in this subject and I don't understand it well enough to teach others.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，建议使用连贯的句子并且清楚表达学习方式的偏好。

例: I don't want to learn geography in a boring way like reading books or watching documentaries. Instead, I prefer to learn through interesting videos.

× I have little interest in geography, maybe becauses I. Don't do well in the subject of geography in my Junior School.

✓ I have little interest in geography, maybe because I didn't do well in the subject of geography in my Junior School.

这里的时间是过去的情况，应该用过去时态'didn't do well'，而不是现在时'don't do well'。

× And I can't understand so direction of wind or. Terry.

✓ And I can't understand the direction of the wind or weather.

这里'understand so direction of wind or Terry'表达不正确，应该用'the direction of the wind or weather'，'so'用错，'Terry'应为'weather'。

× Such as? Understand global issues like climate change and the Verity of. Mountains.

✓ Such as understanding global issues like climate change and the variety of mountains.

'Understand'应改为动名词形式'understanding'，'Verity'拼写错误，应为'variety'。

× Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school. Bad. I didn't do well in this in this subject and I feel it confusing for me.

✓ Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school. But I didn't do well in this subject and I felt it confusing for me.

'Bad'应改为连接词'But'，'feel'应使用过去时'felt'，因为描述的是过去的感受。

× No, just as I mentioned earlier, I. Stone, I didn't do well in this subject. An icon, understand? Well, about this subject, so I cannot impair the knowledge to other peoples.

✓ No, just as I mentioned earlier, I am sorry, I didn't do well in this subject. And I don't understand well about this subject, so I cannot impart the knowledge to other people.

'Stone'应为'sorry'，'An icon'应为'And I don't','impair'用错，应为'impart'，'peoples'应为'people'。

× I think I will not learn the geography in a. Tedious. Way of such as books or. Channel spot I was. Learn it in such interesting ways such as videos.

✓ I think I will not learn geography in a tedious way such as books or channels. I want to learn it in interesting ways such as videos.

句子结构混乱，'Channel spot I was'无意义，改为'channels'，并调整句子使其通顺。