Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词搭配和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地表达兴趣和经历。

例: I have always been interested in geography. When I was in high school, I got good grades in this subject, which sparked my interest. Although I have forgotten some knowledge now, I want to learn it again.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子支持观点，注意句子连贯和词汇准确。

例: Yes, geography is very useful, especially for people who like traveling. For example, when hiking in the mountains, knowing geography helps you find the right path and avoid getting lost.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用正确时态和句子结构，表达兴趣和遗憾时更自然。

例: Yes, I studied geography in high school. I was very interested in it and got good grades. Unfortunately, I have forgotten most of the knowledge now.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议简洁明了地表达自己的想法，并用原因支持观点。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because it requires a lot of professional knowledge, which I find too difficult to handle.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议注意句子结构和词汇使用，表达观点时更具体和连贯。

例: Yes, I find the geography of other countries fascinating because it helps me understand different cultures better. Learning about other countries' geography also gives me a new perspective on my own country.

× I'm really interested in to Agra fee and when I was in high school I got a good grace in geography as so that is the start of my interest and now I almost forget or the knowledge about geography and so I want to pick it up again.

✓ I'm really interested in geography and when I was in high school I got a good grade in geography so that was the start of my interest and now I have almost forgotten the knowledge about geography so I want to pick it up again.

动词短语“interested in”后面应接动名词或名词，不能接不定式“to Agra fee”（应为geography）。此外，句中“forget”应使用完成时态“have forgotten”，表示过去到现在的状态。

× I'm really interested in to Agra fee and when I was in high school I got a good grace in geography as so that is the start of my interest and now I almost forget or the knowledge about geography and so I want to pick it up again.

✓ I'm really interested in geography and when I was in high school I got a good grade in geography so that was the start of my interest and now I have almost forgotten the knowledge about geography so I want to pick it up again.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如“got a good grade”和“that was the start”。

× Geography is. Especially used for for those who are found of traveling when 0 or travel into the mountains is your sense of direction can save their lives and can show the right path in front of them.

✓ Geography is especially useful for those who are fond of traveling. When you travel into the mountains, your sense of direction can save your life and show the right path in front of you.

“found”应为“fond”，“is your sense”应为“your sense is”，且“lives”应与“your”保持一致，改为“life”。

× Geography is. Especially used for for those who are found of traveling when 0 or travel into the mountains is your sense of direction can save their lives and can show the right path in front of them.

✓ Geography is especially useful for those who are fond of traveling. When you travel into the mountains, your sense of direction can save your life and show the right path in front of you.

介词“found of”应为“fond of”，且“for for”重复，应删除多余的“for”。

× Yes, I have learned geography when I was in high school at the time. I'm really interested in this subject and get a good grade. But it's a shame now I have forgot. Most of some knowledge.

✓ Yes, I learned geography when I was in high school. At that time, I was really interested in this subject and got a good grade. But it's a shame that now I have forgotten most of the knowledge.

“have learned”改为一般过去时“learned”，因为时间点明确；“get”改为过去时“got”；“have forgot”应为“have forgotten”，过去分词形式。

× Yes, I have learned geography when I was in high school at the time. I'm really interested in this subject and get a good grade. But it's a shame now I have forgot. Most of some knowledge.

✓ Yes, I learned geography when I was in high school. At that time, I was really interested in this subject and got a good grade. But it's a shame that now I have forgotten most of the knowledge.

“Most of some knowledge”表达不正确，应为“most of the knowledge”或“most of it”。

× I don't want to be a geography teacher Ann. I can't be 1 because I believe being or geography teacher means a lot of professional knowledge which I can't handle and too complex for me.

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher. I can't be one because I believe being a geography teacher requires a lot of professional knowledge which I can't handle and is too complex for me.

“Ann”应为句号或逗号；“1”应为“one”；“or geography teacher”应为“a geography teacher”；缺少动词“requires”；“too complex for me”前应加“is”。

× I don't want to be a geography teacher Ann. I can't be 1 because I believe being or geography teacher means a lot of professional knowledge which I can't handle and too complex for me.

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher. I can't be one because I believe being a geography teacher requires a lot of professional knowledge which I can't handle and is too complex for me.

“can't be one”正确表达能力或可能性，符合情境。

× Yes, I found geography of other countries is really fascinating because it's offers me an opportunity and a direct way to understanding so other country better. And by learning geography of other countries, I can understand much better about my car.

✓ Yes, I find the geography of other countries really fascinating because it offers me an opportunity and a direct way to understand other countries better. By learning the geography of other countries, I can understand much better about my country.

“found”应为“find”；“it's offers”应为“it offers”；“to understanding”应为“to understand”；“so other country better”应为“other countries better”；“my car”应为“my country”。