Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Ví dụ, hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích thêm với các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I'm not very interested in geography, but I have to study it at high school. However, I think learning geography helps me understand navigation, such as directions and locations around the world.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it helps us understand world powers. For example, in my country, it allows me to explore new places that I didn't know before.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc học địa lý của bạn.

例: I have learned geography from primary school to high school. During that time, I studied about Vietnam's geography, including its places and environment.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not good at communicating with children. Also, I find geography difficult, so I don't think I am suited for this job.

提案: Bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries. Understanding their climate and natural resources helps me appreciate the diversity of our world.

× Actually I'm not into on geography since I study at high school but I need to study it but I think study geography can have me to navigation. Though the direction and the place in the world.

✓ Actually, I'm not into geography since I study at high school but I need to study it. I think studying geography can help me with navigation, through directions and places in the world.

The phrase 'not into on geography' is incorrect; 'into' does not require 'on' after it. Also, 'study geography can have me to navigation' is incorrect; the correct form is 'studying geography can help me with navigation'. The verb 'study' should be in gerund form 'studying' to act as a noun here. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.

× Yes, I believe do you ever feet is very very useful because his help us to understand the world powers.

✓ Yes, I believe geography is very, very useful because it helps us to understand the world powers.

The sentence contains modal verb misuse and pronoun errors. 'Do you ever feet' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'geography is'. 'His help' should be 'it helps'. Modal verbs like 'do' are not needed here. Correct subject and verb agreement is necessary.

× I have learn geography when I'm not primary school to high school.

✓ I have learned geography from primary school to high school.

The verb 'learn' in present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'learned'. Also, 'when I'm not primary school' is incorrect; it should be 'from primary school'. The tense and preposition usage must be accurate.

× I have learn geography when I'm not primary school to high school.

✓ I have learned geography from primary school to high school.

The preposition 'when' is incorrectly used to indicate a time range; 'from...to...' is the correct preposition pair to express the period of study.

× Yes, I believe do you ever feet is very very useful because his help us to understand the world powers.

✓ Yes, I believe geography is very, very useful because it helps us to understand the world powers.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used to refer to 'geography'; the correct pronoun is 'it' for inanimate objects. Proper pronoun usage is essential for clarity.

× I will explore, explore more place that I didn't know like when I learning.

✓ I will explore more places that I didn't know while learning.

The phrase 'like when I learning' is incorrect; 'while learning' or 'when I was learning' is correct. Also, 'place' should be plural 'places' to match the context.

× I will explore, explore more place that I didn't know like when I learning.

✓ I will explore more places that I didn't know while learning.

The noun 'place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to multiple locations. Singular and plural agreement is important for grammatical correctness.

× This is for long time gold an I was learning about Vietnam, the geography of Vietnam or some place or environment around Vietnam also in the hole.

✓ This was a long time ago and I was learning about Vietnam, the geography of Vietnam, some places, and the environment around Vietnam as well as the whole country.

The phrase 'for long time gold' is incorrect; it should be 'a long time ago'. Past tense 'was' is appropriate here. Also, 'some place' should be plural 'some places'. Correct tense and vocabulary usage is necessary.

× This is for long time gold an I was learning about Vietnam, the geography of Vietnam or some place or environment around Vietnam also in the hole.

✓ This was a long time ago and I was learning about Vietnam, the geography of Vietnam, some places, and the environment around Vietnam as well as the whole country.

The preposition 'in the hole' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'the whole' meaning entire. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey intended meaning.

× Yes, I am definatly interest in learning more about geography of other countries, understanding different lens, give Klamet an natural resources have me appreciate the diversity of our world.

✓ Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries, understanding different climates and natural resources helps me appreciate the diversity of our world.

The pronoun 'have me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. Also, 'interest' should be 'interested' to match the adjective form. Correct pronoun and adjective forms are necessary.