Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'earth surface' and 'physical atmosphere' without clear explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

例: I really enjoy studying geography because it helps me understand Earth's landscapes and weather patterns. For example, learning about mountains and climate zones fascinates me.

提案: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical errors. Avoid phrases like 'your graph' which is irrelevant here. Use clear linking words and explain why geography is useful with specific reasons.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps scientists predict natural disasters and understand environmental changes, which can protect people and nature.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: If I remember correctly, I started learning geography in 5th grade as my sixth subject, but unfortunately, the school stopped offering it after 6th grade.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'I' at the beginning of sentences and try to combine ideas smoothly.

例: At the moment, I am not very interested in geography because I lack sufficient knowledge. Instead, I prefer teaching accountancy, which is my favourite subject.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and fragmented sentences. Use complete sentences with proper linking words to express your ideas clearly and naturally.

例: Definitely, if I get the chance, I will learn about the geography of other countries because I enjoy discovering different nations and their climates.

× I really enjoy studying geography as it tells about our earth surface, physical atmosphere, and many other things related to our planet and solar system.

✓ I really enjoy studying geography as it tells about our earth's surface, physical atmosphere, and many other things related to our planet and solar system.

The phrase 'earth surface' is incorrect because 'earth' should be possessive to indicate the surface belonging to the earth. Hence, it should be 'earth's surface'. This is a common prepositional and possessive error in English.

× Yes, your graph is definitely very useful as it tells about earth surface and it is very important for our scientists to study.

✓ Yes, geography is definitely very useful as it tells about the earth's surface and it is very important for our scientists to study.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'your graph' instead of 'geography', which is the intended subject. Also, 'earth surface' should be 'the earth's surface' to correctly use the definite article and possessive form. The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'earth's surface' to specify it.

× Upcoming things to our Earth.

✓ It also helps us understand upcoming changes to our Earth.

The original sentence fragment 'Upcoming things to our Earth.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence structure error. A complete sentence with a subject and verb is necessary for clarity.

× If my memory serves me right, when I was in my 5th grade, my school allowed me to learn geography as my 6 subject, but they eventually cancelled the subject after my six class.

✓ If my memory serves me right, when I was in 5th grade, my school allowed me to learn geography as my 6th subject, but they eventually cancelled the subject after my 6th class.

The phrase 'my 5th grade' is acceptable but 'my six class' is incorrect; it should be 'my 6th class' to correctly use ordinal numbers. Also, '6 subject' should be '6th subject' to indicate the position in order. These are past tense related ordinal number usage errors.

× Currently I am not having much interest in geography.

✓ Currently, I do not have much interest in geography.

The phrase 'I am not having much interest' is incorrect because 'have' in this context is a stative verb and is not used in continuous form. The correct form is 'I do not have much interest'. This is a prepositional and verb usage error.

× I love to teach accountancy as it is my favorite subject and also I do not have much knowledge about geography.

✓ I love to teach accountancy as it is my favorite subject and also I do not have much knowledge of geography.

The phrase 'knowledge about geography' is less common and less correct than 'knowledge of geography'. The preposition 'of' is typically used with 'knowledge' to indicate the subject matter.

× Is definitely if I get a chance I will learn geography of other countries.

✓ Definitely, if I get a chance, I will learn the geography of other countries.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'It' at the beginning and misplaces 'definitely'. Also, 'geography of other countries' should have the definite article 'the' before 'geography'. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used for future tense, but sentence structure and article usage need correction.

× Because I love to learn about. Different nations and their climatic conditions.

✓ Because I love to learn about different nations and their climatic conditions.

The original sentence is split incorrectly with a period after 'about', creating a sentence fragment. The sentence should be combined into one complete sentence for clarity and correctness.