Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意味を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「admire to Bo growth with sparkling and shining」は意味が不明瞭です。より自然な英語表現を使い、文法を正しくすることが必要です。

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning. It comes from Hawaiian and means "sparkling." My parents chose it because they hope I will grow up to be bright and shining.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。特に「going to so like for example」や「I really wanna name reader」は意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、明確な理由と具体例を述べる練習が必要です。

例: I would choose a Hawaiian name that means "sparkling" because I love Hawaii. For example, I might name my child "Leilani," which means "heavenly flower."

提案: 意味は伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「almost people doesn't choose this name」は「most people don't choose this name」が正しいです。より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: To be honest, no one in my family has the same name as me. My name is quite unique in Japan, so most people don't choose it.

提案: 質問に対する答えが不適切で、内容が曖昧です。また、「I don't really like about Chinese culture of name」は意味が不明瞭です。質問に直接答え、具体的な違いを述べる練習が必要です。

例: I'm not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, but I know that in the past, names were often chosen based on family heritage, while nowadays, parents might choose more modern or unique names.

提案: 回答がほとんど意味を成しておらず、質問に答えていません。正確な情報がわからなくても、一般的な知識や推測を使って答える練習が必要です。

例: I'm not very familiar with popular Chinese names, but I think names like "Wei" and "Li" are quite common in China.

× My parents admire to Bo growth with sparkling and shining.

✓ My parents admire Bo growing with sparkling and shining.

The verb 'admire' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) without 'to'. Also, 'growth' is a noun, but here the verb form 'growing' is appropriate to describe the action.

× I'd say I'm gonna choose sparkling name which comes from Hawaiian as well, because I really like Hawaii and going to so like for example, I really wanna name reader.

✓ I'd say I'm gonna choose a sparkling name which comes from Hawaiian as well, because I really like Hawaii and want to go there. For example, I really wanna name my child Reader.

The sentence has several issues: missing article before 'sparkling name', incorrect phrase 'going to so like' which should be 'want to go there', and unclear phrase 'name reader' which likely means 'name my child Reader'. Prepositions and sentence structure need correction for clarity.

× To be honest, I don't have a person who is the same name as me.

✓ To be honest, I don't have anyone who has the same name as me.

The phrase 'have a person who is the same name' is incorrect. We use 'anyone who has the same name' to express this idea. Also, 'has' is needed for subject-verb agreement.

× so almost people doesn't choose this name.

✓ so almost people don't choose this name.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number.

× Chinese children has tend to be having Kim.

✓ Chinese children tend to have the surname Kim.

The plural subject 'children' requires the verb 'tend' without 'has'. Also, 'be having' is incorrect here; 'have' is the correct verb. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× Actually I'm not familiar in Chinese name so I don't really know about about it, but I own that thing that I only know is Chinese is popular.

✓ Actually, I'm not familiar with Chinese names, so I don't really know about them, but what I do know is that Chinese names are popular.

The phrase 'familiar in' should be 'familiar with'. 'Know about about it' has a repeated word and should be 'know about them'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.