Part 1
試験官
Does your name have any special meaning?
受験者
Yes it does. As far as I'm concerned its meaning has something connected with love or happiness, but I'm not 100% sure.
試験官
How would you choose names for your next generation?
受験者
I would ask my partner to do that because I don't want to feel that responsibility. Moreover, I just don't really care about names, so I would ask my partner.
試験官
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
受験者
Yes, my great grandmother has the same name as me and my parents decided to name me as Maria exactly for that reason.
試験官
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
受験者
I don't know any information about names in China because I'm personally from Russia and in my country names did not change. Maybe in China they date, but I cannot say that for sure.
試験官
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
受験者
I am not from China, so I cannot say anything about names in China. Probably there are some more popular names because in my country, in Russia, we do have names that are most widespread.
Does your name have any special meaning?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ответ должен быть более уверенным и содержать более конкретную информацию. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи и избегайте неопределённостей.
例: Yes, my name means 'love' or 'happiness', which reflects the positive qualities my parents hoped I would have.
How would you choose names for your next generation?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ответ следует сделать более структурированным и добавить объяснение причины выбора. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.
例: I would ask my partner to choose the names because I believe it is a shared responsibility, and I personally don't have strong preferences about names.
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
スコア: 85.0提案: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить немного больше деталей и использовать связующие слова для улучшения связности.
例: Yes, my great grandmother and I share the same name, Maria, because my parents wanted to honor her legacy.
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
スコア: 50.0提案: Ответ слишком краткий и не содержит конкретной информации. Лучше попытаться предположить или сравнить, используя связующие слова.
例: Although I am not familiar with Chinese naming traditions, I imagine that, like in Russia, naming customs might have evolved over time due to cultural changes.
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ можно улучшить, добавив предположения и связующие слова, чтобы сделать речь более связной и информативной.
例: I don't know much about popular names in China, but I assume there are common names, just like in Russia where certain names are very popular.
× Yes, my great grandmother has the same name as me and my parents decided to name me as Maria exactly for that reason.
✓ Yes, my great grandmother has the same name as me, and my parents decided to name me Maria exactly for that reason.
The phrase 'name me as Maria' is incorrect because the verb 'name' is directly followed by the object and the name without 'as'. The correct structure is 'name me Maria'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses.
× Maybe in China they date, but I cannot say that for sure.
✓ Maybe in China they do that, but I cannot say that for sure.
The phrase 'they date' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. It seems the student intended to say 'they do that' referring to naming practices. Also, 'date' as a verb here is inappropriate. Replacing 'date' with 'do that' clarifies the meaning.