Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then provide specific supporting details using linking words for coherence. For example, use 'My name is Sapna, which means "dream" in my language. Although it has a meaning, I don't consider it very special.'

例: My name is Sapna, which means "dream" in my language. Although it has a meaning, I don't consider it very special.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using linking words. For example, 'I would choose names for my children by searching online because the Internet offers many meaningful options and suggestions.'

例: I would choose names for my children by searching online because the Internet offers many meaningful options and suggestions.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific cultural reasons using linking words. For example, 'No, no one in my family has the same name as me because our tradition prohibits giving the same name to family members.'

例: No, no one in my family has the same name as me because our tradition prohibits giving the same name to family members.

提案: Even if you don't know much about the topic, try to give a brief, polite answer and add a reason or opinion to enrich your response. For example, 'I'm not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, so I can't say for sure if there are differences between past and present practices.'

例: I'm not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, so I can't say for sure if there are differences between past and present practices.

提案: Provide a polite and slightly expanded answer even if you don't know the details. For example, 'I don't know which names are most popular in China, but I imagine that, like in many countries, some names become trendy over time.'

例: I don't know which names are most popular in China, but I imagine that, like in many countries, some names become trendy over time.

× No, I think my name do not have any special meaning because my name is Sapna.

✓ No, I think my name does not have any special meaning because my name is Sapna.

The subject 'my name' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'does not' instead of 'do not' to agree in number and person.

× That's mean dream, but I think it's not a special.

✓ That means dream, but I think it's not special.

The phrase 'That's mean dream' is incorrect; 'That means dream' is correct because 'means' is the verb. Also, 'a special' is incorrect because 'special' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify or should be used without 'a' here.

× I would choose name of my next generations on Internet because Internet on Internet I can get a lot of options with meaningful.

✓ I would choose the names of my next generations on the Internet because on the Internet I can get a lot of meaningful options.

The word 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'next generations'. Also, 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Meaningful' should modify 'options' and be placed before it.

× Meaningful suggestions.

✓ Meaningful suggestions.

This phrase is incomplete as a sentence but grammatically correct as a noun phrase. No correction needed here.

× No, my in my family do not have an the name as as me because in our traditional we can't give the same name to members in a family.

✓ No, my family does not have the same name as me because in our tradition we can't give the same name to members in a family.

'My family' is third person singular, so 'do not have' should be 'does not have'. 'An the' is incorrect; 'the' is correct. 'Traditional' should be 'tradition' as a noun.

× So in my family no other member have the name as me.

✓ So in my family no other member has the same name as me.

The singular subject 'member' requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'the name as me' should be 'the same name as me' for clarity.

× No, I am not familiar with the Chinese culture and how they give the name to their children now and in the past.

✓ No, I am not familiar with Chinese culture and how they name their children now and in the past.

'Give the name to their children' is awkward; 'name their children' is more natural. 'The Chinese culture' can be simplified to 'Chinese culture'. The present tense 'am not familiar' is correct here.

× Actually I do not know about any name which are more popular than others in China.

✓ Actually, I do not know about any names which are more popular than others in China.

'Name' should be plural 'names' to agree with 'which are'. The present tense 'do not know' is correct here.