Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит повторения. Рекомендуется давать более чёткий и связный ответ, избегая излишних повторов и уточняя детали. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, my name does have a special meaning. It is said to reflect certain personality traits, although I can't recall the exact ones. I wish I knew more about it, but I don't regret having this name.

提案: Ответ можно улучшить, сделав его более структурированным и добавив связующие слова для плавности. Также стоит избегать тавтологии и уточнить критерии выбора имени.

例: I would choose names mainly based on how pleasant they sound and how well they are spelled. Since the meaning is not very important to me, I would focus on names that are beautiful and easy to pronounce.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более связным и убрать повторения. Используйте связующие слова для улучшения логики и добавьте немного деталей.

例: No one in my immediate family shares my name, but I do have a distant relative named Irina as well. So, in my extended family, the name is not uncommon.

提案: Ответ слишком общий и не содержит конкретных деталей. Рекомендуется давать более конкретные примеры и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Although I'm not an expert, I believe naming traditions in China have changed over time. Nowadays, parents might choose names based on modern values and trends, unlike in the past when names were more traditional.

提案: Ответ содержит много неуверенности и повторов. Рекомендуется отвечать более уверенно, структурировано и избегать лишних слов. Добавьте конкретные детали, если возможно.

例: I'm not very familiar with Chinese naming customs, but I believe some names are more popular due to their positive meanings and easy pronunciation.

× I remember I really refers to some characteristics of a person, but I can't remember particular ones.

✓ I remember it really refers to some characteristics of a person, but I can't remember particular ones.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I' as the subject for 'refers', which should be 'it' to refer to the name. The verb 'refers' is correctly in third person singular form, but the subject must match. Replacing 'I' with 'it' corrects the subject-verb agreement and clarifies the meaning.

× I wouldn't pay much attention to the meaning of a name it it's not so significant for me just if it's going to be spelled beautifully and said beautifully as well.

✓ I wouldn't pay much attention to the meaning of a name if it's not so significant for me, just if it's going to be spelled beautifully and said beautifully as well.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction between two independent clauses, causing a run-on sentence. Adding 'if' before 'it's not so significant' properly connects the clauses and clarifies the conditional meaning.

× I can't say for sure as I'm not concerned in this sphere, but I can suggest that yes, it has changed a little due to the fact that now people have different priorities for naming their children, different traditions and customs.

✓ I can't say for sure as I'm not concerned with this sphere, but I can suggest that yes, it has changed a little due to the fact that now people have different priorities for naming their children, different traditions and customs.

The phrase 'concerned in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'concerned with' when expressing involvement or interest in a subject. Changing 'in' to 'with' corrects the prepositional usage.