Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid unnecessary details like the poet's birth year unless it is relevant. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning because it was inspired by a famous poet named Saadi. My grandmother chose this name for me because she admired his work.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct response with a topic sentence, then explain your criteria for choosing names with specific details and linking words.

例: I would choose names for the next generation based on their unique meanings and cultural significance. For example, I prefer names that reflect positive qualities or family heritage.

提案: Your answer should be more precise and grammatically correct. Also, avoid irrelevant information about the neighbor's qualities unless it adds value. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: No, no one in my family shares my name. However, my neighbor has the same name as me, which is quite interesting.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Even if you don't know, try to give a general opinion or prediction. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I have never been to China, so I am not very familiar with their naming traditions. However, I believe that like many cultures, Chinese naming practices have changed over time to reflect modern values.

提案: Your answer contains factual inaccuracies and unclear language. 'Nihao' means 'hello' in Chinese, not a name. Try to provide accurate information and use clear, simple language with linking words.

例: Yes, some names are more popular in China. For example, names like Wei and Li are common because they have positive meanings and are easy to pronounce.

× Yes, my name has multiple meanings because my name was taken by a famous poet Sadhi.

✓ Yes, my name has multiple meanings because my name was taken by a famous poet Saadi.

The poet's name is 'Saadi', not 'Sadhi'. This is a spelling correction rather than a grammar issue, but important for accuracy.

× He was born in 1967 and my grandmother took my name.

✓ He was born in 967 and my grandmother took my name.

The famous poet Saadi was born in 967, not 1967. This is a factual correction rather than grammar, but important for accuracy.

× Well, there is a number of list in my head that I would choose for my age, incoming generation and every name is a unique and has a different meaning, so there is a.

✓ Well, there is a list of names in my head that I would choose for my age and the incoming generation, and every name is unique and has a different meaning.

The phrase 'a number of list' is incorrect; it should be 'a list of names'. Also, 'every name is a unique' is incorrect; 'unique' is an absolute adjective and does not take 'a'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Well not in my own family but there is one of my neighbor has same name like mine and he has same qualities as well like me.

✓ Well, not in my own family but one of my neighbors has the same name as mine and he has the same qualities as I do.

'One of my neighbor' should be 'one of my neighbors' (plural). 'Has same name like mine' should be 'has the same name as mine'. Also, 'he has same qualities as well like me' should be 'he has the same qualities as I do' for correct comparison and pronoun use.

× While I have been never went to China and my whole life and I have no idea about the Chinese name and their significance meaning, but I would prefer to research about it and then I would like to calculate about it.

✓ I have never been to China in my whole life and I have no idea about Chinese names and their significant meanings, but I would prefer to research about it and then I would like to learn more.

'I have been never went' is incorrect; correct form is 'I have never been'. 'Chinese name' should be plural 'Chinese names'. 'Significance meaning' should be 'significant meanings'. 'Calculate about it' is incorrect; 'learn more' or 'find out more' is appropriate.

× There are numerous numbers that are already famous in China and over the globe, but one of the most relevant and common name is Nihao, which is known which means how are you and and it's really famous because it has a beautiful meaning.

✓ There are numerous names that are already famous in China and around the globe, but one of the most relevant and common names is Nihao, which means 'how are you' and it's really famous because it has a beautiful meaning.

'Numerous numbers' is incorrect; it should be 'numerous names'. 'Over the globe' is better expressed as 'around the globe'. 'One of the most relevant and common name' should be 'one of the most relevant and common names'. Also, 'which is known which means' is redundant and should be simplified.