Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में विचार स्पष्ट हैं, लेकिन वाक्य संरचना और व्याकरण में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और प्रभावी बनाने के लिए अनावश्यक पुनरावृत्ति से बचें और वाक्यों को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाएं।

例: Yes, my name means 'light of the heart'. It symbolizes positivity and spreads good energy around.

提案: आपका उत्तर विषय से संबंधित है, लेकिन वाक्य संरचना और शब्द चयन में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। उत्तर को अधिक संगठित और स्पष्ट बनाने के लिए उपयुक्त लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

例: I would choose names for my children from the historical book Guru Granth Sahib because it contains many meaningful names related to my religion.

提案: आपका उत्तर बहुत लंबा और थोड़ा असंगठित है। उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और स्पष्ट बनाएं, और अनावश्यक विवरणों से बचें। व्याकरण और शब्द चयन पर ध्यान दें।

例: No one in my family shares my name, but my close friend is also named Manjot. We have known each other since childhood and study together.

提案: आपका उत्तर अस्पष्ट और व्याकरण की दृष्टि से कमजोर है। उत्तर को स्पष्ट और संगठित बनाएं, और उपयुक्त लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें ताकि विचारों का प्रवाह बेहतर हो।

例: Yes, I think naming trends have changed worldwide, including China. Nowadays, people prefer shorter names compared to the longer names used in the past.

提案: आपका उत्तर अधूरा और अस्पष्ट है। उत्तर को पूरा करें, स्पष्ट करें और उपयुक्त शब्दों का उपयोग करें। अधिक विशिष्ट जानकारी दें और वाक्य संरचना सुधारें।

例: Yes, many names are popular in China, though some are unique to certain regions. For example, 'Jian' is a popular Chinese name that means 'healthy' or 'strong'.

× So it's simple symbolize a very special meaning and spreads a positivity around environment because it spreads of positivities, light of heart.

✓ So it simply symbolizes a very special meaning and spreads positivity around the environment because it spreads positivity, light of heart.

The verb 'symbolize' should be in third person singular form 'symbolizes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Simple' should be 'simply' as an adverb modifying the verb. 'Spreads a positivity' is incorrect; 'positivity' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'Around environment' needs the definite article 'the' before 'environment'. 'Spreads of positivities' is incorrect; 'spreads positivity' is correct as 'positivity' is uncountable.

× So it's simple symbolize a very special meaning and spreads a positivity around environment because it spreads of positivities, light of heart.

✓ So it simply symbolizes a very special meaning and spreads positivity around the environment because it spreads positivity, light of heart.

The phrase 'around environment' requires the definite article 'the' before 'environment' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'spreads of positivities' is incorrect; 'spreads positivity' is the correct form as 'positivity' is uncountable and does not take 'of' or plural form.

× There's a lot of meaningful names in this and I really like these names and there's also a different meanings for this and is also related to my religion.

✓ There are a lot of meaningful names in this and I really like these names and there are also different meanings for this and it is also related to my religion.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular; since 'names' and 'meanings' are plural, 'there are' should be used. 'A different meanings' is incorrect because 'meanings' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'is also related' needs the subject 'it' to be complete.

× There's a lot of meaningful names in this and I really like these names and there's also a different meanings for this and is also related to my religion.

✓ There are a lot of meaningful names in this and I really like these names and there are also different meanings for this and it is also related to my religion.

The sentence lacks the subject pronoun 'it' before 'is also related' which is necessary for grammatical completeness.

× No one in my family has the same name as me, but I have a lot of fans who have the same name, Manjot.

✓ No one in my family has the same name as me, but I have a lot of fans who have the same name, Manjot.

This sentence is grammatically correct regarding singular and plural usage; no correction needed here.

× And one of my best friend name is also Manjot.

✓ And one of my best friends' names is also Manjot.

'One of my best friend name' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate one among many, and 'name' should be plural 'names' because 'one of' refers to multiple items. Also, the possessive form 'friends'' is needed to show that the name belongs to one of the friends.

× She's my close friend and we know each other from my childhood and we study together.

✓ She's my close friend and we have known each other since childhood and we study together.

'Know each other from my childhood' is awkward; 'have known each other since childhood' is the correct expression to indicate a relationship starting in the past continuing to present.

× We always sit together in the same band I think so it's a good.

✓ We always sit together in the same band, I think, so it's good.

The sentence lacks commas to separate clauses properly. Also, 'band' is likely a typo for 'bench' or 'class' or 'group' depending on context. 'It's a good' is incomplete; 'it's good' is correct.

× It's in, It's not in even in China.

✓ It's not only in China.

The phrase 'It's in, It's not in even in China' is confusing and incorrect. The corrected sentence simplifies the meaning to 'It's not only in China' to express the intended idea.

× As compared to the past, the names are different nowadays because nowadays names are very shortened.

✓ Compared to the past, names are different nowadays because nowadays names are very short.

'Very shortened' is incorrect; 'very short' is the correct adjective form. Also, 'As compared to' is better simplified to 'Compared to'.

× There is a lot. There are a lot of names that are very popular in China and not even popular in another cities or countries.

✓ There are a lot of names that are very popular in China and not even popular in other cities or countries.

'There is a lot' is incomplete and should be 'There are a lot of names'. 'Another cities' is incorrect; 'other cities' is correct because 'cities' is plural.

× One of my favorite name from China is a Jain.

✓ One of my favorite names from China is Jain.

'One of my favorite name' is incorrect; 'name' should be plural 'names' because 'one of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'a Jain' is incorrect; 'Jain' is a name and does not need an article.