Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够简洁，表达不够自然，有语法错误，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

例: I asked my parents about my name when I was in primary school. They said they chose it because they love the dictionary and thought the word was beautiful.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅，且缺少连接词。建议使用更准确的语法，增加连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明原因。

例: I would choose names that are less popular because common names can be confusing. For example, many people share the same name nowadays, which makes it less unique.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No one in my family has the same name as me, only the family name is shared. Although my name is not very common, I like it because my mother spent a lot of time choosing it from the dictionary.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词，并具体说明差异。

例: Yes, there are many differences. For example, in the past, names like Jian Guo and Zhi Guo were common, but now people prefer names like Zi Han. This shows a change in naming trends.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，缺少逻辑连接。建议使用更准确的语法，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, some names are more popular in China. For instance, many people are named Chen Zhi, which sounds the same despite different spellings.

× I had asked this question of to my parents before when I was in the primary school but they told me that it is just because they loved the dictionary and they found that this this world is great and they just tell me that.

✓ I asked this question to my parents before when I was in primary school, but they told me that it was just because they loved the dictionary and they found that this world is great and they just told me that.

这里使用过去完成时(had asked)不合适，应该用一般过去时(asked)，因为动作发生在过去的某个时间点。'of to my parents'中'of'多余，应去掉。'tell'应改为过去式'told'，保持时态一致。

× Maybe I would like to choose some names that is not so popular because you know, there is some name that is that is very popular nowadays and most people are named that like this.

✓ Maybe I would like to choose some names that are not so popular because you know, there are some names that are very popular nowadays and most people are named like this.

'names that is'中主语是复数，谓语应使用复数形式'are'。'there is some name'应改为'there are some names'，因为后面指复数。

× But I think it is not really great because like so many people call out and it is not unique.

✓ But I think it is not really great because so many people call out and it is not unique.

'like so many people call out'中'like'多余，应去掉。此句无明显单复数错误，但去除多余词使句子更通顺。

× No, we just have the same family name and I think my name is not so common but it's not unique though.

✓ No, we just have the same family name and I think my name is not very common but it's not unique though.

'not so common'表达不够准确，改为'not very common'更自然。此句无明显单复数错误。

× But I really like it because my mum finds find my name in the dictionary for a lot of time.

✓ But I really like it because my mum found my name in the dictionary many times.

'finds find'重复，应去掉一个。'for a lot of time'表达不自然，改为'many times'更合适。时态应为过去式'found'，因为动作发生在过去。

× Yes, there are so many differences between that.

✓ Yes, there are so many differences between them.

'between'后应接两个对象，'that'用法不当，应改为'them'指代前文内容。

× I would like to give you an example, for example, that in the past people always always name like Jian Guo, zhi Guo, but in the now people like to use words like the Zi Han or a lot of them.

✓ I would like to give you an example. For example, in the past people always named like Jian Guo, Zhi Guo, but now people like to use words like Zi Han or many others.

'always name'应为过去式'always named'，因为指过去习惯。'in the now'表达错误，应为'now'。'a lot of them'改为'many others'更合适。

× So I think the trend of it is become more different.

✓ So I think the trend is becoming more different.

'is become'错误，应为现在进行时'is becoming'，表示趋势正在变化。

× I would like to tell you about some words in Chinese that is more popular than others.

✓ I would like to tell you about some words in Chinese that are more popular than others.

'some words'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。

× For example, the Chen Zhi like this was, although there are different spellings, but the pronunciation is the same.

✓ For example, Chen Zhi is like this. Although there are different spellings, the pronunciation is the same.

句子结构混乱，'was'用法不当，应拆分为两个句子，去掉'but'使句子更通顺。

× So actually there are a lot of them people named like this.

✓ So actually there are a lot of people named like this.

'them people'错误，应去掉'them'，直接用'people'。