Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并明确表达名字的含义。

例: Yes, my name is Zhu, which means a kind of herb. My mother chose it because it has an auspicious meaning and sounds poetic.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: In my culture, we avoid using names of great figures. We usually give children the father's family name, and their names must have auspicious meanings to avoid bad luck.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子并明确说明原因。

例: No, in China, it is common to avoid giving the same name as parents or elders to show respect.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，建议补充具体例子并使用连接词使表达更完整。

例: Yes, names often reflect the era. In the past, people used political names, but now they prefer more modern and personal names.

提案: 表达不够准确，语法和词汇使用有误，建议重组句子并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, Zhang is one of the most common family names in China. Also, many people choose the name Wei because it means heroic or strong.

× Of course my name is poetic and feminine name I think is Zhu is a kind of herb.

✓ Of course, my name is a poetic and feminine name. I think Zhu is a kind of herb.

句中缺少冠词“a”，导致单复数错误。名词“name”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示单数。

× My mom named me for the auspicious meaning.

✓ My mom named me because of the auspicious meaning.

介词“for”用法不当，表达原因时应使用“because of”。

× we avoid the great figure's name and we carry the father's family name, and the meaning of the children's name must be auspicious or to avoid the ominous meaning.

✓ we avoid great figures' names and we carry the father's family name, and the meaning of the children's names must be auspicious or avoid ominous meanings.

“figure's name”应为复数形式“figures' names”，表示多个伟人名字；“children's name”应为复数“children's names”；“to avoid”前不应有“to”，且“ominous meaning”应为复数。

× No, because there is no honoring culture in China and we avoid to get the same names with my father's or mothers or the seniors of claim it's it should be avoided.

✓ No, because there is no honoring culture in China and we avoid having the same names as my father's, mother's, or the seniors'. It should be avoided.

“avoid to get”用法错误，应为“avoid having”；“same names with”应为“same names as”；“mothers”应为所有格“mother's”；句子结构混乱，需拆分。

× Yes, I think the name of a generation can mirror the era and in parts we always named some politic names and now we prefer to some.

✓ Yes, I think the name of a generation can mirror the era, and in the past we always named some political names, and now we prefer some.

“in parts”应为“in the past”；“politic”应为形容词“political”；“prefer to some”错误，正确为“prefer some”。

× Yes, I think maybe strongly because Zhang is a the most big family names and Wei means being heroic, pure heroic or strong so many people names that.

✓ Yes, I think maybe strongly because Zhang is one of the biggest family names, and Wei means being heroic, purely heroic, or strong, so many people are named that.

“the most big”错误，应为“one of the biggest”；“many people names that”缺少动词，应为“many people are named that”。