Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "you know" và cố gắng trình bày ý tưởng một cách trực tiếp, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.

例: My name is inspired by a famous singer whom my mother admires. She is known for her beautiful voice and talent, and my mother hopes I can inherit some of her qualities.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "you know". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với cấu trúc câu tốt và ý tưởng được trình bày mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể để mô tả cách bạn chọn tên.

例: I would choose a name carefully, one that reflects a lively and cheerful personality, because I believe a name can influence a person's character.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và trình bày ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, my cousin and I share the same name because my grandmother named us after a famous singer we both admire.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các từ không cần thiết như "like" và "you know". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến cá nhân một cách mạch lạc.

例: Although I'm Vietnamese, I believe that in every country, including China, the way parents choose names for their children has changed over time, reflecting cultural and social shifts.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự chắc chắn và có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng. Hãy cung cấp thông tin cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để trả lời câu hỏi.

例: I believe the surname Yang is quite popular in China, possibly because many celebrities have this name, which might influence its popularity.

× Well, I'm not sure about it, but I'm just, you know, like my mom told me that my name was this like the same name as a famous singer.

✓ Well, I'm not sure about it, but I'm just, you know, like my mom told me that my name is the same as a famous singer's.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was' instead of 'is' when referring to the name, which is a present fact. Also, 'like the same name as' is awkward; it should be 'the same as'. The present participle 'like' is used unnecessarily here. The correction clarifies the present state and improves sentence flow.

× She's beautiful and, you know, she has a gifted voice and I think she, my mom wants me to.

✓ She's beautiful and, you know, she has a gifted voice, and I think my mom wants me to be like her.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. The phrase 'I think she, my mom wants me to' lacks a verb and object. Adding 'be like her' completes the thought. The present participle 'like' is used correctly here as a preposition, but the sentence structure needs correction.

× Well, so it's I think a name would be, you know, like belongs belongings to to people.

✓ Well, so I think a name would be, you know, like belonging to people.

The phrase 'belongs belongings to to people' is incorrect and redundant. 'Belonging to' is the correct present participle form to express possession. The correction removes repetition and uses the correct form.

× So yeah, I have to choose carefully and I think I would choose the name that have the that could, you know, like the vibe of shake and cool or some cheerful person.

✓ So yeah, I have to choose carefully and I think I would choose a name that has the vibe of being strong and cool or a cheerful person.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('name that have') and awkward phrasing ('vibe of shake and cool'). 'Shake' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'strong'. The correction fixes agreement and clarifies meaning using correct present participle 'being'.

× My cousin she has the same name with me like link so that's what my grandma wants.

✓ My cousin has the same name as me, like Link, so that's what my grandma wants.

The phrase 'same name with me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'same name as'. Also, 'like link' should be capitalized as 'Link' if it's a name. The correction fixes preposition use and capitalization.

× Like my our names was both the famous singer names.

✓ Our names were both the names of famous singers.

The phrase 'my our names' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'our names'. Also, 'was' should be 'were' for plural subject. The correction fixes pronoun and verb agreement.

× So I'm not sure about this because I'm Vietnamese, but I think in like in every country they they will have differences in like in this in the present and in the past for the way parents choosing their children's name.

✓ So I'm not sure about this because I'm Vietnamese, but I think in every country there are differences between the present and the past in the way parents choose their children's names.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect prepositions ('in like in', 'in this in the present'). Also, 'parents choosing' should be 'parents choose' to match the sentence structure. The correction simplifies prepositions and corrects verb form.

× Well, I think I don't know, like the Yang, the Yang, I think so because many celebrities that has that have that name.

✓ Well, I think I don't know, like Yang, I think so because many celebrities have that name.

The phrase 'celebrities that has that have that name' is incorrect; 'celebrities' is plural, so the verb should be 'have'. The correction removes redundancy and fixes subject-verb agreement.