Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법 오류를 줄이고 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'my name have' 대신 'my name has'를 사용하고, 중복되는 표현을 피하며 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요.

例: Yes, my name has a special meaning; it means a truly shining star. My parents chose this name because they wanted me to live up to its meaning.

提案: 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 불필요한 단어를 줄이고, 문법적으로 올바른 문장을 사용하며, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

例: I haven't thought about names for my future children yet, but if I do, I would choose names that are easy to pronounce globally, like Jenny.

提案: 문법과 문장 구조를 개선하고, 의미 전달이 명확하도록 구체적인 설명을 추가하세요. 예를 들어, 부정문과 의문문을 혼용하지 말고, 비슷한 이름에 대해 명확히 설명하세요.

例: No, no one in my family has the same name as me, but some names sound similar to mine.

提案: 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 논리적으로 연결하세요. 또한, 'have special meaning name' 대신 'names with special meanings'와 같은 표현을 사용하세요.

例: I think in the past, many parents didn't focus much on the special meanings of names because they had many children. However, nowadays, parents try to give their children names with special meanings.

提案: 중복되는 표현을 줄이고, 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한, 'give their name as' 대신 'name their children after'와 같은 표현을 사용하세요.

例: I think popular TV dramas can influence children's names. For example, parents often name their children after the main characters in popular dramas.

× Yes my name have special meaning so my name is means a truly shining star.

✓ Yes, my name has a special meaning, so my name means a truly shining star.

The subject 'my name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'is means' is incorrect; it should be just 'means'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and verb usage.

× So my parents wanted me to live like my name meaning so they gave me this name.

✓ So my parents wanted me to live according to my name's meaning, so they gave me this name.

The phrase 'live like my name meaning' is awkward; 'live according to my name's meaning' is clearer. Also, the sentence uses 'so' twice; restructuring improves clarity.

× Well actually I have never thought names for my next generation, but if I have to give their name so I want to make their name globally such as Jenny.

✓ Well, actually I have never thought about names for my next generation, but if I have to give them names, I want to choose names that are global, such as Jenny.

The verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to a topic. Also, 'give their name' should be 'give them names'. The phrase 'make their name globally' is unclear; 'choose names that are global' is better.

× No anyone have the same name as me?

✓ No, does anyone have the same name as me?

The sentence is a question and requires auxiliary 'does' for singular third person. 'Anyone' is singular, so 'have' should be 'has' or use 'does anyone have'.

× But there are names are familiar with sounds like.

✓ But there are names that sound similar.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Names are familiar with sounds like' is incorrect. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× I think many parents in the past didn't care about the special meaning of names because they had many children.

✓ I think many parents in the past didn't care about the special meaning of names because they had many children.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no correction needed.

× But now parents try to give their children have special meaning name.

✓ But now parents try to give their children names with special meanings.

The phrase 'try to give their children have special meaning name' is incorrect. It should be 'try to give their children names with special meanings' to correctly express the idea.

× So I think the popular drama can have effect on their children's name.

✓ So I think popular dramas can have an effect on their children's names.

'Have effect on' requires the article 'an' before 'effect'. Also, 'drama' should be plural 'dramas' to match the context, and 'children's name' should be plural 'children's names'.

× So what I mean is that parents tend to give their name as a main character of popular drama.

✓ So what I mean is that parents tend to give their children names of main characters from popular dramas.

'Give their name' is unclear; it should be 'give their children names'. Also, 'a main character of popular drama' should be pluralized and clarified as 'main characters from popular dramas'.