Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain why your name is special to you with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is coherent and natural.

例: My full name is Rababdeep Kaur, which means 'lamp of the heart' in Punjabi. Although it may not have a specific meaning to everyone, it is very special to me because it connects me to my spiritual heritage and family traditions.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases and be concise.

例: Nowadays, there are many options for choosing names. Since technology is very advanced, I would use mobile apps like AI or ChatGPT to help me select meaningful names for my children.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a direct answer first, then support it with specific details. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating words.

例: No, no one in my family shares my name because it is unique. In fact, during my school days, I never met another student named Rababdeep.

提案: Instead of saying you don't know, try to give a general opinion or guess based on what you think. This shows your ability to handle questions even if you lack specific knowledge.

例: Although I am not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, I believe that in the past, names were chosen based on family heritage, while nowadays, parents might prefer modern or popular names influenced by global culture.

提案: Try to avoid saying you cannot answer. Instead, give a simple opinion or guess to show your speaking ability and keep the conversation going.

例: I am not sure about the most popular names in China, but I think names like 'Wei' or 'Li' might be common because I have heard them often in movies and books.

× It is different from everyone and it connects with the spiritual past which.

✓ It is different from everyone and it connects with the spiritual past.

The sentence ends with 'which' without completing the clause, causing a sentence structure error. Removing 'which' completes the sentence properly.

× There are lot of options available nowadays.

✓ There are lots of options available nowadays.

The phrase 'lot of' should be 'lots of' or 'a lot of' when referring to plural countable nouns. 'Lots of' is more appropriate here.

× As I am living in a modern era, technology becomes far more advanced so I will take.

✓ As I am living in a modern era, technology is becoming far more advanced, so I will take help.

The verb 'becomes' should be in present continuous 'is becoming' to match the ongoing action indicated by 'am living'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'help' completes the thought.

× So I will take help of the technologies.

✓ So I will take help from the technologies.

The correct preposition with 'take help' is 'from', not 'of'.

× Gadgets like gadgets like mobile phone will help me.

✓ Gadgets like mobile phones will help me.

The phrase 'gadgets like gadgets like' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match 'gadgets'.

× In mobile phone there are several apps such as AI or ChatGPT which help me to choose names for my next generation.

✓ On mobile phones, there are several apps such as AI or ChatGPT which help me choose names for my next generation.

The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to apps on a device. Also, 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to generalize. 'Help me to choose' can be simplified to 'help me choose'.

× No, in my family there is not a such person who has similar name as mine because my name is.

✓ No, in my family there is not such a person who has a similar name as mine because my name is unique.

The phrase 'not a such person' is incorrect; it should be 'not such a person'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'unique' completes the thought.

× My name is different and unique from each and every person.

✓ My name is different and unique from every person.

The phrase 'each and every person' is redundant; 'every person' suffices.

× In fact, in my school there are there was not not a single student with by my name.

✓ In fact, in my school there was not a single student with my name.

The sentence has redundant words 'there are there was not not' which should be corrected to 'there was not'. Also, 'with by my name' is incorrect; 'with my name' is correct.

× When I'm unable to answer that question because I have not much knowledge about the Chinese and their culture, so I don't know about their names.

✓ I am unable to answer that question because I do not have much knowledge about the Chinese and their culture, so I don't know about their names.

The sentence starts with 'When' incorrectly, causing a sentence structure error. Removing 'When' and starting with 'I am unable' corrects the sentence.

× I have not much knowledge about this and I am unable to answer this question.

✓ I do not have much knowledge about this and I am unable to answer this question.

The phrase 'I have not much knowledge' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not have much knowledge'.