Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, my name Hemant Singh has a special meaning. It signifies honesty and calmness, qualities I always strive to maintain in every situation.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a direct response with clear reasoning and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and be specific about how technology influences naming.

例: I would choose names for the next generation by exploring popular names on social media platforms like Instagram, as technology greatly influences current naming trends.

提案: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity and natural flow.

例: No, I am the only person in my family with the name Hemanth. I believe my name is unique, which gives me a distinct identity.

提案: Clarify your answer by structuring it properly with linking words. Explain the contrast between past and present naming practices clearly and avoid fragmented sentences.

例: Nowadays, many Chinese parents use technology to find baby names, while in the past, they often chose names based on ancestors and traditional rituals.

提案: Make your answer more precise and coherent by using linking words and avoiding vague phrases. Directly address the popularity of names and how globalization affects naming choices.

例: Due to globalization, popular names in China are influenced by various cultures, and many people choose names they like from social media platforms regardless of origin.

× Every name have special meanings and me as well.

✓ Every name has special meanings and mine as well.

The subject 'Every name' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'me' is incorrect here; the possessive pronoun 'mine' should be used to indicate possession.

× Every name have special meanings and me as well.

✓ Every name has special meanings and mine as well.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used; it should be the possessive pronoun 'mine' to correctly express possession.

× I'm always focus on this too.

✓ I'm always focused on this too.

The verb 'focus' should be in the past participle form 'focused' to correctly form the present perfect continuous tense with 'am'.

× As technology is increased at an unprecedented rate, so according to me, I prefer to use technological gadgets like on Instagram platform as well as many other social media platform platforms to give name to my near and dear ones in upcoming future.

✓ As technology is increasing at an unprecedented rate, so according to me, I prefer to use technological gadgets like Instagram platform as well as many other social media platforms to give names to my near and dear ones in the upcoming future.

'Technology' is uncountable and should be used with 'is increasing' to indicate ongoing action. 'Platform' should be plural 'platforms' when referring to multiple social media. Also, 'give name' should be 'give names' to match plural recipients.

× like on Instagram platform as well as many other social media platform platforms

✓ like Instagram platform as well as many other social media platforms

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'Instagram platform' in this context and should be removed for correct usage.

× Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?

✓ Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I never ever saw anyone who have the same name like me.

✓ I have never ever seen anyone who has the same name as me.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have seen' to indicate experience up to now. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'anyone'. Also, 'like me' should be 'as me' for correct comparison.

× I never ever saw anyone who have the same name like me.

✓ I have never ever seen anyone who has the same name as me.

The preposition 'like' is incorrect in this comparison; 'as' should be used instead.

× My name is very unique and it gave me a unique personality in the world.

✓ My name is very unique and it gives me a unique personality in the world.

The verb 'gave' is past tense but the sentence refers to a current state, so present tense 'gives' is appropriate.

× In past life a couple of decades.

✓ In the past, a couple of decades ago.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks the article 'the'. Also, 'past life' is incorrect; it should be 'in the past' or 'a couple of decades ago' for clarity.

× So people use ancestors as well as they use their rituals and traditional name from their elder ones to giving name to their new ones.

✓ So people use ancestors' names as well as their rituals and traditional names from their elders to give names to their new ones.

The phrase 'use ancestors' is incomplete; it should be 'use ancestors' names'. 'Elder ones' should be 'elders'. 'Giving name' should be 'give names' to match the infinitive form and plural.

× So people use ancestors as well as they use their rituals and traditional name from their elder ones to giving name to their new ones.

✓ So people use ancestors' names as well as their rituals and traditional names from their elders to give names to their new ones.

The noun 'name' should be plural 'names' to agree with the plural subject 'people' and plural objects.

× Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?

✓ Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Well, nowadays as globalization is increased day by day so I think so there is not the barrier between the names according to the countries and the borders.

✓ Well, nowadays as globalization is increasing day by day, so I think there is no barrier between the names according to the countries and the borders.

The verb 'is increased' should be present continuous 'is increasing' to indicate ongoing action. 'There is not the barrier' should be 'there is no barrier' for correct negation.

× People gave name to their near and dear ones by using social media platforms and the name they like the most.

✓ People give names to their near and dear ones by using social media platforms and the names they like the most.

The verb tense should be present 'give' to match 'nowadays'. 'Name' should be plural 'names' to agree with plural recipients. Also, 'gave' is past tense and inconsistent with 'nowadays'.