Names— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不够清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，直接说明名字的含义，并避免无关信息。

例: Yes, my name means 'full moon,' symbolizing gentleness and perfection. My parents hoped I would be calm and kind.

提案: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Honestly, I don't plan to have children, but if I did, I would choose a name that sounds pleasant and is easy to remember because simplicity and meaningfulness are important to me.

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富，但口语化词汇较多，建议适当使用正式表达，避免俚语。

例: No, in Chinese families, names are usually unique. My parents wanted my name to be one-of-a-kind, similar to a patent. Sometimes relatives share a character, but not the full name.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且不连贯。建议明确比较过去和现在的命名习惯，使用连接词组织语言。

例: There is a big difference. In the past, people believed that giving simple or even 'ugly' names would help children survive. Nowadays, names tend to be more elegant and meaningful, reflecting modern tastes.

提案: 回答内容丰富但表达稍显口语化且有些夸张。建议使用更正式的表达，避免过度修饰。

例: Yes, some names like Jianguo, meaning 'Build the nation,' were very popular in the past. These names reflected patriotic feelings during that time.

× I don't want a baby, but if I had I would like choose a name that sounds pleasant and is easy to remember.

✓ I don't want a baby, but if I had one, I would like to choose a name that sounds pleasant and is easy to remember.

句中缺少了表示假设条件的宾语“one”，且“would like”后面应接动词不定式“to choose”，这是过去时态条件句的正确用法。

× Fate used to matter and now it's just a theoretic.

✓ Fate used to matter and now it's just theoretical.

“theoretic”是形容词，但在这里应使用更常见的形容词“theoretical”来表达“理论上的”，以符合英语习惯用法。